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The Adventures of Jim the Trim-At the Beach

On this tropical beach, one hot summer day Jim the Trim came, his bod to display Been workin’ out day and night Made the girls' eyes burn bright Next, he's running from muscles that sashay KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 10 April 2015

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Date: 4/15/2015 3:54:00 PM
You write a great Lime Ricky Kim! Love it!
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Date: 4/14/2015 9:10:00 PM
Funny! Nice one Kim!
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Date: 4/12/2015 8:18:00 AM
Okay, this one tickled me! LOL 7+++ Big huggsies, Jack xxx
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Date: 4/11/2015 9:49:00 AM
A great limerick Kim....enjoyed
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Date: 4/11/2015 7:41:00 AM
So if the guys are all really gays, Do you think God gives them much praise? Or is it something in our system that is incrusted and our life styles need to be adjusted? Married 50 years on August 27, 2016. Jim Horn
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Date: 4/11/2015 8:41:00 AM
James, the limerick per definition, is a five-line, often humorous and ribald poem with a strict meter. Mine does not aspire to make a lament nor critique or endorse being gay as a sexual orientation. What you see is what you get in my limericks, just poke a fun at realistic albeit quite exaggerated just a bit, slice of life. Thank you for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. All the best. Kim
Date: 4/11/2015 5:36:00 AM
Oh Kim,.... What a shock for him....... Felling so grim...... Yet looking so trim------very good poem with a twist---kind regards---John
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:36:00 AM
Hi Kim! Tua musa is quite a witty one:) I can well picture the scene...Jim on the run! hugs // paul
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Date: 4/11/2015 1:23:00 AM
LOL now this sure made me smile!!!!
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Date: 4/10/2015 8:52:00 PM
Yeh!! more Lims from Kim! Going to read the other now!~Jan
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Date: 4/10/2015 6:39:00 PM
This is really funny! I love it Kim.
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Date: 4/10/2015 3:51:00 PM
lol Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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