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The Admirals Sun

The Admiral’s Sun 5th draft – 6-11-2014 A pedestal for your glory and the ego’s your command, your shadow darkens the people you demand. Your rusting medals are demanding a respect, beyond the value of those you do neglect. The world is learning to shun this bloody valor, well past due for society’s defining hour. Beyond your limitations you dared not tread, your father’s path repeated with dread. Higher thinking would have polished your crown, surpassing the gleam that soon finds the ground Senility and death are your only companions now, emptiness your spouse and still she does frown. Michael G. Eggert, March-April, 2014, Riyadh, Saudi Arabia

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Date: 5/19/2016 2:25:00 PM
Michael Eggert, nice to see this one again. skat-
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Date: 1/25/2015 12:41:00 AM
Michael, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:36:00 AM
Michael, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2015 7:01:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P- Soup,Michael - Hope you will post many more poems in the future - We are many members here, but always enjoyable with new "poets" - thanks for your first well written and moving poem! - // Anne-Lise :)
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