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The Abyss In Loving Someone

The Abyss In Loving Someone


Falling in love with the darkest abyss of someone's soul,
Finding their ugliest, darkest part of them.
Rounding up the demons that lurk around inside of them,
The deep darkest abyss of their souls' sea.

Then when no one is watching,
You get down to the deep level of their souls.
And then there you'll feel as though,
You've seen and felt their hell.

When you get that deep inside someone:
You'll find that;
You'll need to love the hell out of that one person.

Or if you've to fall in love, for that one's light,
Before having to stand alone in the darkness of them?
Then you'll be loving those people,
On top of the surface, they show you.

But that isn't real:
It's lusts of their flesh.
Where the eyes of a human had opened:
From the temptations that were born; 
By dark forces and were ashamed.

And that's the devil's playground,
Wanting you to bite from it's forbidden.


Ranked #84 "Best New Poem" from PoetrySoup™
out of 100. Sept. 22, 2020

Copyright © William Darnell Sr | Year Posted 2020

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William Darnell Sr Date: 9/22/2020 7:38:00 AM I need to get to my website and I add my poems and other poetry of Featured writers. I have read some of your two's poetry, and I do feature writers, out of respect that we all share a common in mind. If either of you you would ever like to be featured, just let me know because it helps me become a better writer from the day before. John Watt, Constance La France, thank you, both for very constructive comments, and may God Bless you both. Best of Wishes, William Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 9/8/2020 5:49:00 PM Your heartbreak is immeasurable, William. Besides my deepest condolences, all I can say is that you are being healthy by writing your feelings, and sharing them with your community. Many of us can relate to the pain and sadness, and can hopefully lessen your pain by sharing in it. God bless you ~ John Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 9/8/2020 10:31:00 PM Hi, John! Your comment is actually the most constructive one, I've received since I became a member of PoetrySoup, in 2013. And, I truly appreciate you saying that, and that makes me even more grateful to being here. Yes, you've made me even more comfortable being here. Thank you, once again. I truly pray that God's Blessing will abundantly fill your desires. I bid you well John. Best of Wishes, William

Constance La France Date: 9/8/2020 9:42:00 AM William, a very deep poem, I can tell you are in a dark place at the moment but sometimes that is when we write our best poetry and this poem is excellent, a FAV for me _Constance Login to Reply William Darnell Sr Date: 9/22/2020 7:27:00 AM Hello, Constance. I don't even know how to respond; indeed, I don't. Thank you very much, and yes, I am trying to forgive myself for self-conviction. The past 22 years for me have been a nightmare inside me, but it causes me some mental illnesses over the horrific event. I'm trying diligently to forgive myself. It's just something I hold myself 100% responsible for, even though it isn't my fault, so they say. I had just seen this ranked #84 Best New Poems in my email, and I'm honored by that. Thank you, again Constance, and God Bless you. Best of Wishes, William