The Wrinkled Shadow

Most of the days as I buy vegetables the old woman would move around close to me like the winter tree The leaves mostly robbed by the time tangled age seated in the hair the freckles painting the drudgery The unwashed and overused sari stained by the tears of poverty Would not speak to beg money would just move around with the eloquent wounds Most of the days but not every time I would give her small amounts A faint almost invisible smile Would come and disappear The lips lacked tissue The other day in the late afternoon when the shadows had started prolonging under the banyan tree the afternoon light and the leaves wove hand in hand a story in the shadow The very small and irregular shapes of the pale soft light sat in such a way that gave the impression of a woman squatted on the pavement It looked so from a distance of say thirty feet As I came close I found the old woman sprinkling parched rice to the pigeons The source of the shadow the afternoon painted beneath the tree A little tissue collected in the lips now The lilac of love doesn't wither Nor the object ______________________________________ March 2, 2018

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Date: 3/18/2018 5:01:00 PM
I'm not a poet, joined P.S. to force myself to try and write...you dear soul, write from somewhere so intense. Susan and Brenda expressed my feelings also. Remember..new to poetry, LOVED.."lilac of love". Are you associating this with the intensely wonderful lingering fragrance?
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Date: 3/18/2018 10:11:00 PM
The lilacs of love symbolise primarily one' s desire to love ... The object of love shifts depending on the environment ... But the intrinsic desire seldom dies ... Thank you for your admirable query ... The more you will cultivate the images and nurture them in your poem, the better will be the ambience in the lungs ...
Date: 3/13/2018 5:15:00 PM
Oh, I am so touched by your eloquent and moving poem. I absolutely adore this write, Porbir, from the captivating content to your superb imagery and beautiful closing lines - your story-telling is heartfelt and breathtaking.. I fell in love with every poetic line of this deep and lush poem. Exquisite! A fav for me!! Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan
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Date: 3/18/2018 10:14:00 PM
My tongue is too poor to express adequately my appreciation of what you write, whether in poetry or in the comments ... Thank you, Susan ...
Date: 3/3/2018 2:18:00 PM
Beautiful painting and you know I love paintings....Magnificent..
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Date: 3/3/2018 11:13:00 PM
Yes I know ... Thank you ...
Date: 3/3/2018 8:22:00 AM
I love the imagery and descriptiveness of your moving poem, Probir, and the last two lines are just so beautiful.
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Date: 3/3/2018 11:13:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes ...
Date: 3/2/2018 7:12:00 AM
I was there with you as I read your touching poem Probir, great piece of poetry. :))
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Date: 3/3/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you, Roy ...
Date: 3/2/2018 6:44:00 AM
"The lilac of love doesn't wither"....Beautiful story Probir...
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph ...
Date: 3/2/2018 6:35:00 AM
The image of that woman flashes by even after I finished reading your poem..very creative and unique, Probir.
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 3/2/2018 6:29:00 AM
A story that is deep, to be pondered and chewed upon! Love it! Fave, Probir!
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Kim ...
Date: 3/2/2018 6:12:00 AM
A touching story done so poetically..
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Silent ...
Date: 3/2/2018 6:01:00 AM
- A touching story, lovely written Probir - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/2/2018 7:07:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
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