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The Unbound Soul

Deep beneath the upright mind, far deeper than the unconscious, unseen, unfelt, unknown, yet... rare, very rarely its intimations will sudden-like float through your veins, then your brain, and thrilled beyond reason you will wonder for such a small moment what waved your soul to come alive.... [written and posted 9/2019]

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2019 7:07:00 PM

I love that part "you will wonder for such a small moment...." Nice!

L. J. Carber
Date: 9/29/2019 11:23:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I like that bit too!

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 9/24/2019 3:17:00 AM

These moments are indeed to be treasured. I think they may vary in nature, when YOU (the soul) break free - could be (for me) any thing from ecstasy to a feeling that everything is ALRIGHT. Blessings on you, Len.

L. J. Carber
Date: 9/24/2019 9:23:00 AM

Thank you, my friend-- and may God keep and bless always you and yours!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/22/2019 8:53:00 AM

Yes indeed--those small moments that make soul alive are precious..so well written!

L. J. Carber
Date: 9/22/2019 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay, I'm glad you liked it.