The Thunderstorm

The lightning zig- zagged across the wheat belt
A storm was beginning to brew
Thunder rolled in the distance
Like the beating roll of a drum
The clouds became an ever deepening gray
Once light and fluffy, now have turned  dark
Dark as the lumps of coal
Clouds now heavily laden with moisture
The rain begins to calmly fall to earth
Suddenly a boom and the heaven's break loose
The rain pelts, the wind pushes and bends
Soaking all within it's path 
It's awesome power uncontrolled
The landscape is soaked in minutes
Pools of water become instant lakes
The air becomes cool and fresh
The moisture feeds the prairie land
As the thunder ceases and flashes disappear
The storm quickly moves on.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/10/2010 1:13:00 PM
I was captivated by the description of this storm, Phyllis. Excellent imagery and, of course, the storms always move on. Electifying and gripping poetry! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 8:26:00 AM
A great portrait. The poem makes a fine crescendo then diminuendo. Love, Dave
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Date: 9/9/2010 3:49:00 PM
So descriptive that I felt like I was there in the storm myself..Glad that I chose this one to read..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:28:00 PM
We need some of this storm Phyllis and all we have is very high and windy conditions with fire hazards looming from the dryness here.. your descriptions are quite perfect in every line ..enjoyed your creativity tonight with luv..
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Date: 9/8/2010 5:50:00 PM
sounds like a really big show!! really big show!!
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Date: 9/8/2010 5:49:00 PM
Nice observation well penned thoughts on the thunderstorm, Phyllis
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Date: 9/8/2010 4:10:00 PM
ah, love it, no matter what darkness comes at us it's always just passing on, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 9/8/2010 4:07:00 PM
I felt caught up in that rainstorm..very nice..Take care~Deb
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