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The Shout

They stood there like ghosts these apparitions. Survival was attrition- Eyes, like big black holes. Slowly ,barefoot , moved these emaciated Poles. The one in front ,raised his hand and pointed to that heap of sand. Skin hung on his frame; who was to carry this evil shame? He let out a guttural shriek! This shrouded and tormented freak. Had bid farewell to his next of kin- through the stacks this dreadful sin. With feeble walk he made the gate; aware that they had not sealed his fate.

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Date: 1/23/2025 11:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:30:00 PM
THEO, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 11/7/2014 7:10:00 PM
An extremely chilling write with vivid description and imagery :-) Hugs jan xx
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