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~The Dream~
( Triolet )
-A tribute to "The Slave’s Dream" by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow-


One night the slave had a nice dream 
And in the dream he was just free 
He heard sounds of freedom’s bold scream 
One night the slave had a nice dream 
And saw light of liberty’s gleam 
No more felt flesh by whips just bleed 
One night the slave had a nice dream 
And in the dream he was just free.  



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2008



July.01.2016


~Author's Notes:

Henry Wadsworth Longfellow (February 27, 1807 – March 24, 1882) was an American poet and educator, whose works include "Paul Revere's Ride", The Song of Hiawatha, and Evangeline. He was also the first American to translate Dante Alighieri's Divine Comedy, and was one of the five Fireside Poets.

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Date: 7/1/2016 9:09:00 PM
Good write
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/11/2016 12:15:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly,Michael G,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D
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