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The Battle

A thousand eyes observed as he Battled the forces within; The age old war of good and evil, Between righteousness and sin; Free will, the gift of God to man The Power that charts our Fate; The ability to forgive and love, Or to harbor malice and hate; One man now stood within the scale Balanced evenly on the beams; Inside, one voice speaks words of good, The other, hatred screams“Kill him!" "He had first wronged you and Only this will ease the grudge;” "Remember what the Lord has said, Judge not lest ye be judged;” Who will he heed?What will he do? The darkness hides his face; But slowly, as his hand goes down We get a sense of Grace; Hallelujah! Heard from up above, The angels’ voices chorus; Tomorrow will be other sins, But tonight,Score one for Us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/27/2016 2:42:00 PM
Bril piece David, nice rhyme and flow, really enjoyed it bringing praise to God!
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Date: 3/26/2016 2:45:00 AM
david shaw, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/23/2016 4:22:00 AM
David,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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