The Great Escape

THE   GREAT    ESCAPE

Responded to a scream from the kitchen in our house,
Got there to find daughter imprisoned by a mouse:
On a chair she was  hand-to-mouth scared of the  rodent.
Creature was just as scared but rather impudent.

Brush-chased him  round the kitchen  twice;
Figured, “ Gotcha, you representative  of mice.”
Then in a corner where he went, 
Finally  brush-trapped my  tiny opponent.

Heard him squeak beneath the brush’s bristles :
In his  small voice mixed  with whistles.
A note of defiance  as he climbed through the brush 
Then suddenly out and made a rush

For the curtains  hanging on the door.
He disappeared  quickly  off the floor
Into the folds and was seen no more:
Nothing left for us to search for.

Have to admire these miniature guys  -
Facing  an enemy a thousand times their size
Brush-armed and protecting  a  daughter   -
Midget escaped, laughing  at danger and slaughter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/4/2011 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney for the contest "The one that got away" sponsored by Thvia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:09:00 PM
Very cute Syd!!! Go mousies! RUN!!! Congrad's [Hope you're working on a shamanic write for me ;)] Light & Love
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Thvia, Sydney
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:51:00 AM
Vivid picture you have painted. I have actually witnessed a few very much the same. Amazing the power of a tiny mouse, to bring down the house. Great writing, Sydney. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:27:00 AM
Hi Sydney, It looks like neither of us had much luck with the chase. love this, i can relate to this so well. congrats on a well deserved winner. Harry
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Super enjoyed this whirring, thrilling poem..Gautami
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:10:00 PM
I was completely entertained by this write and I have to admit I was rooting for the wee rodent! Love this!
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:56:00 PM
finally, the poem you copied from me won!... ( kidding)... this is a artwork of words and images brewe with saucy humor, syd! CONGRATS and APPLAUSE... :)huggs
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:55:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your super win in Thvia's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy your great victory and happy weekend too luv..
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