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The Bus Service

THE   BUS    SERVICE 



It was a hot affair - intensely. 
Older  bus of the O.K. Company  
Coughed and roared up hills.
No cure for all its ills.
In and out of stuffy tunnels 
Packed like fish right to the gunwales.   
Men’s ties were off and collars loose: 
Their running sweat was still profuse.
Women’s faces fanned with papers, 
Children fractious did no capers.


The bus was not uncomfortable, 
It simply gave  no  comfort   able 
To calm the tired voyager
To please the weary passenger. 
Its seats were clearly padded, 
With hard lumps specially added.
The cooling system nonexistent, 
Defied with noise our good intent 
To talk above the engine’s roar, 
Like a sleeping husband’s snore. 


The bus had its advantages - lamely, 
It was somewhat faster than walking; 
But many disadvantages – namely,
The impossibility of talking.
In short, I think the guy from hell 
Who named the  company grasped quite well 
The quality offered by the service: 
With words he plainly was no novice.
It wasn't awful, it wasn't excellent, 
It was just O.K. - that was his intent. 
And that was good enough I’d  say 
For most of us that hot summer's day.
However, getting off the bus seemed 
To be the only thing of which we dreamed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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