The Air-Ocean's Plankton

THE      AIR-OCEAN’S     PLANKTON


Snow falls  like  icy ocean-plankton.  The air swarms  
With  their  immense unsullied nebulae  swirling  in waves,
Tiny immaculate individuals in an innumerable host,
A  silver-ivory  myriad  to  be  harvested.                                              
           

Trees taking gulps of air-plankton, great chunks  of airy snow,     
Stretch lattices  of arms and hands skyward to catch them,     
Each numb finger and thumb  laden to the very nail  
With  its  neat  impeccable pile of alabaster  fishlets.


Sky-net  filigrees, their  great  interstices  seafoamed,
Filled with unblemished air-fish,  blank white  plankton:  
The trees overfill  every empty arm with the light white host:
Like women grasp fleamarket  bargain necklaces of pearls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/9/2011 4:08:00 AM
Sydney your imagery is quite captivating, stunning metaphor used, congratulations on your win in Chris's contest :)
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:25:00 PM
What very unique imagery you use here, Sydney! This is such an awesome read and I enjoyed this very much-- super congrats on your win :)!
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:19:00 PM
Congrats Syd on another great win in Chris;s contest luv.. awesome as always.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/8/2011 7:51:00 PM
awesome Sydney, so much interwoven here, and the subtlety is quite extraordinary, a well deserved winner. Harry
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Date: 3/8/2011 5:32:00 PM
The ocean brings us many gifts and the plankton are very useful in medical research. This is a beautiful poem, Syd. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/8/2011 4:32:00 PM
lovely poem, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Chris, Sydney
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Date: 3/8/2011 12:13:00 PM
syd... this one hit the roofs of tower's genius ( mine, i mean, lo)... serously, congrats for being near top of the heap; and that is a compliment! keep it up!! you have a keen sense of observation , of special attentipn to details.. i bow!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/8/2011 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Chris's contest Sydney. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2011 10:03:00 AM
Hey YOU kid! ;) stop beating out the old broads!!! LOL so glad Chris appreciates YOU, SEE you do write SO well! Congrad's on this big WIN! a fan Light & Love
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Date: 3/8/2011 8:17:00 AM
Another outstanding poem from you Sydney...your words spiral with beautiful descriptions....such subtle ways to see this picture you have painted. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2011 10:32:00 AM
as always, your words paint images in colors of majesty... so intricate and delicate this time, much like my poem which you slightly revised, lol... delighted! please read my " garlands and helmet"; it;s a different me.. did send you PM, can you check please?? :) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:16:00 PM
ohh, this one i really like to the max.. when you;re sponatneous , you can really dazzle us all.. hpw did you pull this from my xxx james bond file?? lol.. seriously, an ace and should be in a contest! got my soupy mail yet??:) huggs nette
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