The 65th Day

It began only by inches.  
Tracing back time 
  all the way down the road, 
   until you re-arrive 
     to the last remembered crossroad. 
And you think, where did it all go wrong?
Inch by inch, day by day.  
You awaken to fresh joys.  
These fits of the opened spirit 
  are only the beginning.  
These circuitous routes of our lives, 
  these deep rhythmic patterns, random and cogent. 
When sung in harmony 
sorrow is joy.  
In inseparable union.  
To this the old creaking road 
  muttered a groan.  
William was walking into 
  his 65th day of the trek.  
He was searching for the remote chapel, 
  deep in the woods, 
      that his father had died in...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mason Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Sounds like the beginning of a wonderful story here, Matt ... smile ... I thought at first from the title someone was counting days off cigarettes and/or sober ... LOL ... sometimes I think my world is too small ... smile ...
Mogotsi Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 10:45 PM
Nice. "You awaken to fresh joys" love that verse. light and love Tumelo
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