Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

The 4 Seasons - TFS

Sweetly
comes spring
with rain
and sun;
nature 
is so
alive

Hotter
days make
me laze.
I thrill
to feel
summer
arrive.

Autumn
brightly
adorns
trees and
cool nights
lengthen
out then.

Snow drifts
aglow;
winter
brings cold
till spring
returns
again.

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Janice Canerdy September 15, 2025 at 12:41 PM Andrea, this is an exceptional poem! CONGRATS! Janice

Lin Lane September 15, 2025 at 8:38 AM I see your fantastic poem received 2nd place, and that prompts me to return the same comment to you that you left for me. This would've been a first place win for me, Andrea. Deservedly so. I'm on the verge of ignoring most contests again.

David Crandall September 14, 2025 at 5:49 PM It's great if you can embrace every season as you have in this poem!

Terry Miller September 14, 2025 at 4:26 PM Nicely done, this was a tricky contest, congratulations

Krishnanand Guptar September 14, 2025 at 7:38 AM Congratulations, dear poetess on your win in this contest with a lovely poem on the four seasons, depicting succinctly the features of each season. Wishing you a charming autumn.

Charles Messina September 14, 2025 at 3:43 AM Very nicely written as usual, Andrea. Thanks for entering my contest and Congratulations on your placement!

Paige Hind August 30, 2025 at 7:38 PM Lovely TFS!

Janice Canerdy August 30, 2025 at 12:42 PM Excellent poem, Andrea! Janice

CayCay Godwin August 28, 2025 at 5:30 PM Delightful, Andrea. I'm sure it'll do better than well. Love, CayCay

Jay Narain August 28, 2025 at 10:57 AM Nice summary of all the four seasons in two syllables lines. Nice imagery. Best wishes in the contest.

Valsa George August 28, 2025 at 9:20 AM You have beautifully summarised the salient traits of all four seasons in short lines of two syllables. All the Best, Andrea!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh August 28, 2025 at 1:30 AM Spring the most beautiful and pleasant season Like the poem

sara Etgen-Baker August 27, 2025 at 5:39 PM sincerely liked your imagery; best wishes with this entry in the contest, Sara

Joseph P. DiMino August 27, 2025 at 1:50 PM Indeed, all in Nature's order. Well done! Delightful imagery.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2025 at 1:18 PM - Lovely written, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs