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The 12-And-A-Half Advantage

1874…. The spectacularly lacey ferns rose up and fluffed themselves as self-appointed front-drops to the hidden cave. Thus insuring this scene would remain a secret, secluded, unvisited spot for the next four or five hundred years, having no idea both parents had found this spot when they were his age. 2286… A young girl with long curly hair, brown eyes, splashes of freckles, and curiosity a yard long re-discovered his Magic Cave, only she named it “Twinkle Pretty Cave.” Neither realized that this cave in the back forty acres of their relatives’ property was always discovered by twelve and a half year olds. And especially never realizing that she would soon forget “Twinkle Pretty Cave” existed The cave only showed itself to twelve and a half year olds, but when they turned 15 or drank their first drop of alcohol, whichever came first, they would promptly forget it, as it was a childhood place. The cave laughed, thinking of all the twelve and a half year olds that were to keep coming, because they never stopped. They had been coming ever since she could remember. And they would just keep coming.

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Date: 5/2/2018 8:22:00 AM
Lovely poem, Caren. Magical.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/2/2018 10:34:00 AM
That is what I was hoping people would think, thanks Line.
Date: 5/2/2018 2:24:00 AM
Wish I could be 12 again, I'll never see the 'cave' again. Tom.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/2/2018 6:50:00 AM
Hahaha I know. right? I was thinking about all the amazing things that happen when we are 12 and a half, and how they are never quite amazing ever again.

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