The 11th Hour

Behind sweetest smiles, deceit does hide!
All on a summer day.
A friendly nod, yet one knows not
The lot that waits along the way.
No fashioned track or stair to go
Or signpost to consult.	
The way is life, the road is vague
And knowledge too precise..
To fight and find, use might and will;
The people reason right..
Yet all “despite” and all the fight,
And employed the utmost will.
A turn to take, a road to run,
That never brings you back,
I’ll think we will find it ever so,
This mortal life to “hack”.
To understand is dangerous,
While change is sudden death.
And through it all, don’t dare call the odds
Or they will hit you back!
To autumnal haze or winter days
In chaos, toil and strife,
The fruit of truth is often squandered
Or sanitised in black.
And though they paint the page of life
As light as white can be
The lines on it will smudge
And run, into lies as needs may be..." 

ammended 15th 4th 2012



© Joe Maverick 16-09-2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/10/2012 10:10:00 PM
Returning to your 11th HOur poem, one of my favorites of yours. I contacted soup on the "problem" as you asked. TEll me if you hear anything from them.
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Date: 5/3/2012 3:30:00 PM
Sometimes the only bearing one can rely on is intuition. It has no "track or stair to go Or signpost to consult" yet it can lead you to where ever you must go. You are a deep and complex man, Joe Maverick! Best wishes, Love, Mikki
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Date: 4/13/2012 5:05:00 PM
I really like the last two lines and the other part that says "don't call the odds or they will hit you back. " Very true messages!!
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Date: 7/23/2011 8:54:00 PM
joe, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 2:44:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on PS. ..my friend.. a great piece to entertain us all with luv.. hope all is well with u...
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Date: 6/30/2011 5:14:00 PM
Very creative work..Telling lies and living lies is not a good thing..Very glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work even though you thought that you were reading Nette's work..Sara
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Date: 9/19/2010 12:24:00 PM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/19/2010 8:31:00 AM
Very creative and injteresting write on the 11th hour, Joe
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