That's When the Fight Began

They restricted celebrations,
forget your relations.

They restricted travel,
watched families unravel.

They restricted purchases,
no provided services.

They closed the schools,
those were the new rules.

They closed the churches,
no Sunday soul searches.

They closed the gyms
and the flab begins.

They closed the restaurants,
forget sweet tooth wants.

They closed the theaters,
no full-length features.

They closed retail stores,
no welcoming doors.

They closed the bars,
murmurs of wars.

Society accepted it as well as they could,
as everyone felt the need to be good.

But then they closed the brothel –
an act so heinously hostile –

What? You call that a plan!
That’s when the fight began.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:35 AM
Linda, so clever, and so witty! Really enjoyed reading this poem. And you are so good in rhymes! Congratulations on your win.
Fowler Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Thank you dear Mala for such kind words and for the congrats! :) Linda
Sambourne Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Very clever. I do envy poets such as yourself who rhyme so seamlessly. Quite a talent. Best wishes on such a fine contest submission + win. Brian
Fowler Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 5:31 AM
Ah, but dear Brian, a story is only as good as its teller, with or without rhyme. I noticed that you write a lot of free verse, which does not come easy for me. You are masterful at it. :) Be well, Linda
Puddifoot Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 2:05 PM
different rendering of the theme - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 3:20 PM
Thanks for the visit Charlotte, and for the congrats! Linda
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 10:35 AM
- Yes, it concerns us all - Congratulations on your 10th place in the contest, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 1:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thanks for the congrats and visit! Linda
Rose  Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 8:51 AM
lol, far too many restrictions these day. Everyone suffers, well written dear poetess. Thank you for sharing congrats on your win.
Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 9:05 AM
Yes, I agree. Very soon we will be trained zombies...LOL Thanks for the visit and comment! Linda
Krutsinger Avatar
February 23, 2021 at 11:38 AM
And all was well until.....snicker. snicker.
Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Thanks Caren. :) I appreciate your visit and comment! Linda
Wolf Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 5:36 PM
Wonderful, Linda! Can't imagine closing the brothel when the tattoo parlor is still open. Very witty! Cheers, Gershon
Fowler Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Thank you Gershon. :) It is ridiculous about the tattoo parlors isn't it? Linda
Rose Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Hahahahaha ! What a delightful and witty write ! .......and sadly not too far from reality . This is the first thing I read today and I now know I’ll have to read more of your work. Well done ! Darrell
Fowler Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Hello Darrell. I'm glad you enjoyed this :) It was a fun one to write. Thank you for the nice comments! Linda
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 11:52 AM
I had no idea Linda where this one was going til the end, only that you where saving something good; and girl you delivered big time, fantastic transition from reality into humorous imagination, good luck in the contest, cheers David
Fowler Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Hey David! Thanks for the visit and nice comments :) Linda
Leffanta Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 10:58 AM
WELL done! A winner for sure! Aloha! Rico
Fowler Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 11:07 AM
Hey Rico - thanks! Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 12:55 AM
I could not be helped. More business for rents. ~~
Fowler Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Hello Victor! Thanks for the visit. :) Linda
Ligon Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 6:04 PM
This is perfect for the contest! Best wishes.
Fowler Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Thank you Juliet. Thank you so much for stopping by with nice comments! Linda
Swartz Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 1:18 PM
This is a great poem Linda! Good luck in the contest I'm sure you'll place high with this.
Fowler Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 2:17 PM
Hi James. :) Thanks for stopping by with kind and supportive comments! Linda
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