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Anyone else tiring of the petty quarrels on the Soup?

Economy of language Rhythm and flow Heightened stylistics That's poetry, you know Metaphor, simile Allusions, imagery... Personal vendettas ~ Unwelcome asymmetry

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Date: 1/5/2022 11:48:00 AM
I like this " Personal vendettas ~ Unwelcome asymmetry"
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Date: 12/27/2021 7:16:00 PM
As we all know, there are a variety of poems ..... some very condensed like yours and some lengthy narratives... Each has its own plus and minuses.... Can't say which is better. However personal vendetta is abominable. Well presented dear Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2021 7:19:00 PM
Right you are, Valsa. This is no place for personal vendettas -- or for 'pointing out faults' of others. No one here has been appointed 'judge!' Sweetness and Light, Gershon
Date: 12/26/2021 3:42:00 PM
Mine's an Italian Family -- that's our usual dinner table!:) Remember that skit with Imogene Coca & Sid Caesar? They were hilarious together. Well said, Gershon!
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Date: 12/23/2021 10:35:00 AM
Nicely said, Gershon! Shine on!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/27/2021 7:17:00 PM
Trying my best not to let it get to me; but it is pretty maddening. :) gw
Date: 12/22/2021 4:42:00 PM
YES, and YES. It is the season to celebrate peace and love and good will toward men…..Amen! Thank you Gershon.
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Date: 12/21/2021 1:02:00 PM
A Happy Holidays greeting to you and your family Gershon!! Looking forward to reading future verses from a very gifted mind. Mazel Tov...ab
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Date: 12/21/2021 12:35:00 PM
- My poems are made of sugar and love :) - I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed happy new year, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2021 8:12:00 PM
Hi! Gershon, I like your poem. Your have a gift putting your words on paper. I haven't been here that long to know what the issues are. I left Facebook because of the the trolling and trouble makers. Seasons Greetings ~ Debra
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Date: 12/20/2021 1:21:00 PM
This could be subtitled "In defense of the defense of the defenseless"
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Date: 12/20/2021 12:30:00 PM
Agree with Tom. Also, time to stop blaming. More space for every voice. Pangie
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Date: 12/20/2021 10:25:00 AM
Enough is enough, admin needs to step in, one strike and you're out. Tom
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John Lawless
Date: 12/20/2021 1:20:00 PM
careful Tom, if that happens it will not be long until they get around to......you.....and .....me ....and
Date: 12/20/2021 9:56:00 AM
Yes, indeed, Gershon. We all are! I much prefer to read, write, and comment on poetry, which is what the site is for. But, I'm not going to be bullied on this site I paid good money for! We were all getting along so well until the trolls showed up!
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Date: 12/20/2021 9:46:00 AM
yeah am fed up of it GW but I had to add my 5p worth to someone who claims they are a new member which is pure BS:-( hugs Jan xx
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