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Anyone else tiring of the petty quarrels on the Soup?

That's Poetry

Economy of language
       Rhythm and flow
     Heightened stylistics
       That's poetry, you know

     Metaphor, simile
       Allusions, imagery...

     Personal vendettas ~
       Unwelcome asymmetry
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 11:48 AM
I like this " Personal vendettas ~ Unwelcome asymmetry"
George Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 7:16 PM
As we all know, there are a variety of poems ..... some very condensed like yours and some lengthy narratives... Each has its own plus and minuses.... Can't say which is better. However personal vendetta is abominable. Well presented dear Gershon
Wolf Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 7:19 PM
Right you are, Valsa. This is no place for personal vendettas -- or for 'pointing out faults' of others. No one here has been appointed 'judge!' Sweetness and Light, Gershon
DiMino Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Mine's an Italian Family -- that's our usual dinner table!:) Remember that skit with Imogene Coca & Sid Caesar? They were hilarious together. Well said, Gershon!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Nicely said, Gershon! Shine on!
Wolf Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 7:17 PM
Trying my best not to let it get to me; but it is pretty maddening. :) gw
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 4:42 PM
YES, and YES. It is the season to celebrate peace and love and good will toward men…..Amen! Thank you Gershon.
Boles Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 1:02 PM
A Happy Holidays greeting to you and your family Gershon!! Looking forward to reading future verses from a very gifted mind. Mazel Tov...ab
Andresen Avatar
December 21, 2021 at 12:35 PM
- My poems are made of sugar and love :) - I wish you a wonderful Christmas and a blessed happy new year, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Brown Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Hi! Gershon, I like your poem. Your have a gift putting your words on paper. I haven't been here that long to know what the issues are. I left Facebook because of the the trolling and trouble makers. Seasons Greetings ~ Debra
Lawless Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 1:21 PM
This could be subtitled "In defense of the defense of the defenseless"
Romios Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Agree with Tom. Also, time to stop blaming. More space for every voice. Pangie
Cunningham Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 10:25 AM
Enough is enough, admin needs to step in, one strike and you're out. Tom
Lawless Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 1:20 PM
careful Tom, if that happens it will not be long until they get around to......you.....and .....me ....and
Hankins Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 9:56 AM
Yes, indeed, Gershon. We all are! I much prefer to read, write, and comment on poetry, which is what the site is for. But, I'm not going to be bullied on this site I paid good money for! We were all getting along so well until the trolls showed up!
Allison Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 9:46 AM
yeah am fed up of it GW but I had to add my 5p worth to someone who claims they are a new member which is pure BS:-( hugs Jan xx
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