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That's Not Safe

They teach you to lock your doors, to label everything fragile before it’s touched, to flinch from heat, to never trust the flame— as if safety were a kind of virtue. But love asks for the opposite. It hands you a blade and says, Now offer them your throat. It promises no armour. Only presence. You step inside anyway, barefoot, carrying nothing but your name, knowing it could be dropped, scratched, or spoken like a weapon. And still, you stay— not because it’s safe, but because it’s real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/26/2025 9:07:00 PM
I agree with Paige here, such a raw and beautiful write... Love is nothing but a gamble in which you put all on the table, praying that your partner will see and cherish the risk you take. Real love cuts, deeply, but perhaps we only feel human when there's pain. Such an inspirational poem!
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and heartfelt response. I truly appreciate your insight and ongoing support—it means a great deal to me. I’m glad the poem resonated with you and sparked such a meaningful reflection on love and its risks. Your words are truly inspiring.
Date: 5/26/2025 8:35:00 PM
A raw and beautiful write-
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:19:00 AM
Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your ongoing support—it means a lot to me.
Date: 5/26/2025 12:46:00 PM
Great poem! "Wise men say, only fools rush in, ..."
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:18:00 AM
Thank you so much. I’m really glad you enjoyed it—and you’re right, that Elvis line perfectly captures the meaning of the poem. Such timeless wisdom in those words.
Date: 5/26/2025 1:46:00 AM
Aaliyah, Certain truths we hold self-evident. And still, you stay... -R
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. Your words mean a great deal—both powerful and poetic. I'm honoured and deeply moved.

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