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Thats Life

Earth quakes, hands shake Bone breaks, piss takes Story's end, new ones start We click unfreind, we fall apart, Blood boils, tempers flare, Light to dark, we cease to care, They look at me, they see through you, same old **** it's nothing new, Be unique and be insane, Be yourself and play the game, Tear a rip in time and space, Leave your mark to suit the case, Dry your tears and open your mind, search for something hard to find, Anger, hate, love, joy, Smiles reveal the real McCoy, Cogs turn and life go,s on, Open eyes that learn from wrong, Brakes fail, crash and burn, we stand in line and wait our turn, Words of wisdom, pierce your soul, Call me butter, I'm on a roll, Pages turn, we get in rutts, A journey full of paper cuts, Story's in tales, short and tall, Try telling me, I've lived it all Slugs wishing they where snails, No suprise, this is wales Face your demons, steal the show, Break the mould, finger the crow, Run like a bath or butter my bread, if you want a chat........il be in the shed!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/29/2016 3:23:00 AM
Hi Lisa. Congrats for your WIN in the contest, with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/27/2016 9:34:00 AM
WOW! This poem practically raps itself. Seriously, this could be lyrics for a great rap. Impressive job! I love "Call me butter; I'm on a roll" and "a journey full of paper cuts." Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 6/27/2016 8:51:00 AM
SO, Lisa, don't hold back.....just say what you mean. The rapid fire, terse, almost rap-like meter and rhyme had me reading this a few times. Thanks for submitting it to the contest
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Date: 6/23/2016 5:57:00 AM
I love your flow and honesty in your poems. Good job.
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:38:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 2/27/2014 12:59:00 PM
Great flow to this...I like how you just went for it with no apologies. Good stuff...Caleb
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:07:00 AM
Lisa a big welcome, this is great, a rant but a great rant with some very specific points and there is nothing wrong with Wales, I am just over the Mersey...David
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Date: 2/22/2014 11:44:00 PM
Hi Lisa, Welcome to the Soup. You are very brave to put your first posted poem up for critique. I enjoyed it. It reads like a rap. You have a few typos (Did you want "stories" instead of "story's"?) and a few lines that seem to need a break in the middle. A few of the images wander ("snails" and "Wales", for example), but on the whole, it holds together fairly well. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. Feel free to stop by my little nook and chime in. Cheers!
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Date: 2/17/2014 9:05:00 AM
I love the consistent rhyme. You piqued my interest from the start and kept all through the end. Thank you for sharing! - Mike.
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Date: 2/17/2014 3:48:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Lisa- I choose your first great :"Thats Life" poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2014 2:36:00 AM
Hi, Lisa, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/16/2014 7:49:00 PM
lovely rhyme, welcome to the soup happy reading and writing Jan x
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Date: 2/16/2014 4:22:00 PM
Thank you for taking time to read my poem much love x
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Date: 2/16/2014 4:00:00 PM
Awesome free verse poem Lisa, love the non-stop rhyme. , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Lisa Costigan
Date: 2/16/2014 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments <3
Date: 2/16/2014 2:40:00 PM
Wow Lisa this is amazing..I really love how it flows...Tim
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Lisa Costigan
Date: 2/16/2014 4:17:00 PM
Thank you for your comments and taking time to read my poem x

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