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Written on February 4, 2024

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That's How It Feels


It feels like the best day, 
When our hearts spend the moments,
Sharing smiles and kisses, a warmth,
Beyond what thoughts have promised.

It feels like the best night,
When our souls spend the evenings,
Sharing hugs and hopes, affection,
Breathless moonlight joys.

It feels like the best relationship,
When the two of us meet, our feelings…
Soundless as the wind, calming,
Like the soothing of a spiritual healing.

It feels like the wonderful,
Brought to life in hearts who believe,
Life is meant to be shared, to be united,
By love that never seems to stop giving.

It feels like the blessing from God,
When we reach beyond our self-interest,
Discovering the music of two hearts, two souls,
Aching to be a part of one hope, one dream, one love.

It feels like the kind of love I want,
When I think of the way that it is between us,
When we come together, joined by this light,
That keeps our hearts beholding love’s reflection.

It feels more beautiful than I can hope to explain,
This miracle of a love that is filled with gentling,
Love that reminds me – my heart has found its peace,
Love that restores me – so that I’m complete!
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February 4, 2024 at 11:18 AM
I love how your opens with a sense of euphoria, describing the feeling of being enveloped in the warmth and joy of shared moments. The imagery of smiles, kisses, hugs, and hopes creates a vivid portrayal of intimacy and connection between two hearts. It suggests that love transcends mere thoughts and promises, manifesting as a tangible and transformative force in our lives.
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February 4, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Toooooo good! A fav for me, dear Gina, thanks for sharing
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