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That Sucks

< on your own death bed you couldn't even admit ........ that you were married Entry For Paula Swenson's Contest Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right G.L. All

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2010 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Katherine in Paula Swanson's contest " Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/17/2010 7:03:00 AM

Now there's a wrong that should have been made right! Congratulations on your win, Katherine. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2010 8:15:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Katherine

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/16/2010 7:11:00 PM

Congratulations Katherine on you Senryu win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/16/2010 6:54:00 PM

Congrats Katherine on your winning poem in Paula's contest... enjoyed your great words.. now u enjoy a sweet success .. victory dance..luv..caio..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2010 8:42:00 PM

OH Katherine how important to know ahead of time.. awesome write good luck in the contest.. this one smells WINNER to me..luv..caio..

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/15/2010 1:28:00 PM

Good luck for the contest Katherine, love Wilma

Constance La France

Date: 8/15/2010 10:27:00 AM

but did he love you? Very powerful three lines, it is echoing in my head, and between the lines I see the tears~~

Date: 8/15/2010 9:49:00 AM

Now, that truly is taking nastiness to the very end. Sad that so many don't see marriage as a treasure. Thought provoking poem. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good week. Karen

John Rhinem

Date: 8/15/2010 7:32:00 AM

Ps. Well, of course I am very truly and sincerely sorry to here such a unpleasantry towards such "A Very Precious Lady As Yourself Dear Katherine," and yet, I truly hope this is an emotion long healed within "Your Beautiful Heart" ~ And "Thank You Dear," for Your kind com ~ "Much Love Always," John! ~ Smile, "Now Go Have That Bright & Beautiful Day Precious Katherine Stella;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/15/2010 7:15:00 AM

Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Bright & Beautiful Day Dear Katherine, Amid The Arms of Precious Love;" Bye!:) ~ Ps. Smile, and stay away from those married cheating rotten lying pathetic "Men" ~ Smile, "Bye Dear!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/15/2010 7:10:00 AM

Smile ~ Well if he was upon his own death bed I'm wondering and, he were married then, I am sure hopefully that it would be his wife by his side....And "Yes," two wrongs Never make a right!!! ~ Smile, "Hello Precious & Lovely Katherine Stella" ~ I hope that life is treating You beautifully dear and, what a sorrow this moment here would definitely seem to be!! Hopefuly its merely creative fiction from an extremely lovely and gifted poetess; "You Yourself" ~ ....Cont:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/15/2010 7:02:00 AM

interesdting Senryu this, enjoyed the poem. Good luck in contest. Harry

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/15/2010 6:50:00 AM

great entry for contest... always Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2010 6:39:00 AM

Good luck in the contest, enjoyed your poem,, except the part where he is a liar liar and could not admit it,..p.d.