That Sucks

<                                     on your own death bed 
                                       you couldn't even admit ........
                                       that you were married














Entry For Paula Swenson's Contest 
Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right
G.L. All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your win Katherine in Paula Swanson's contest " Two Wrongs Don't Make A Right". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 7:03 AM
Now there's a wrong that should have been made right! Congratulations on your win, Katherine. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Congrats on the win, Katherine
Johnson Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Congratulations Katherine on you Senryu win.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Congrats Katherine on your winning poem in Paula's contest... enjoyed your great words.. now u enjoy a sweet success .. victory dance..luv..caio..
Sweetheart Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 8:42 PM
OH Katherine how important to know ahead of time.. awesome write good luck in the contest.. this one smells WINNER to me..luv..caio..
Neels Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 1:28 PM
Good luck for the contest Katherine, love Wilma
La France Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 10:27 AM
but did he love you? Very powerful three lines, it is echoing in my head, and between the lines I see the tears~~
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August 15, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Now, that truly is taking nastiness to the very end. Sad that so many don't see marriage as a treasure. Thought provoking poem. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good week. Karen
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August 15, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Ps. Well, of course I am very truly and sincerely sorry to here such a unpleasantry towards such "A Very Precious Lady As Yourself Dear Katherine," and yet, I truly hope this is an emotion long healed within "Your Beautiful Heart" ~ And "Thank You Dear," for Your kind com ~ "Much Love Always," John! ~ Smile, "Now Go Have That Bright & Beautiful Day Precious Katherine Stella;" Bye Dear Lady!:) ~
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August 15, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Smile ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Bright & Beautiful Day Dear Katherine, Amid The Arms of Precious Love;" Bye!:) ~ Ps. Smile, and stay away from those married cheating rotten lying pathetic "Men" ~ Smile, "Bye Dear!":) ~
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August 15, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Smile ~ Well if he was upon his own death bed I'm wondering and, he were married then, I am sure hopefully that it would be his wife by his side....And "Yes," two wrongs Never make a right!!! ~ Smile, "Hello Precious & Lovely Katherine Stella" ~ I hope that life is treating You beautifully dear and, what a sorrow this moment here would definitely seem to be!! Hopefuly its merely creative fiction from an extremely lovely and gifted poetess; "You Yourself" ~ ....Cont:)
Horsman Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 7:02 AM
interesdting Senryu this, enjoyed the poem. Good luck in contest. Harry
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August 15, 2010 at 6:50 AM
great entry for contest... always Michael
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August 15, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Good luck in the contest, enjoyed your poem,, except the part where he is a liar liar and could not admit it,..p.d.
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