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That Strange Shadow a Forbidden Haibun

Spring night -- an odd attraction to this alley. Dark shadows -- something lurking in that corner. Soft breeze -- a weird paralysis in my legs. softly breezes blow: hair fluttering fled, disarrayed what: distraction eyes blinking wildly -- stiff deadened toes shivered body slow --- stiffened Nothing heard -- within non-sounds: darkness rose eventide swoons spring night moonbeam bright bumping jumping slithering crawling

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Date: 3/2/2022 3:11:00 PM
Hello Robert Bellam, Spring evening does have odd attractions. Yet in the evening on a dark night the stars come out with the full moon. Enjoyyour evening my friend.
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