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That Silly Grin a Pirouette Poem

You left me standing there With that silly face grin Once again you out-shined A sunny blue sky day Laughing as you galloped. Laughing as you galloped, I watched you disappear. What your love did to me, Left with that silly grin My pain, cutting deeply. Cynthia

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/13/2012 12:32:00 AM
In your third line, "out-shinned" should be correctly spelled "outshined". You describe his grin as being something very damaging. Forget him and don't notice his grin.
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