That Rainy Day

We walked down the vineyard,
And you were close by my side,
Without saying a single word,
You slowly reached for my hand.
For a moment we were both quiet,
And the moment was so perfect.
I looked up the pretty clear sky,
And saw it become dark and cloudy,
Suddenly I was filled with delight,
When our hands found each other,
It came to me that we were alone,
And then you turned your face to mine,
I swear I could have jumped a step back,
When you leaned and your grip tightened,
As you said “lets hurry it’s gonna rain.”
I couldn’t believe it all just fade away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/20/2018 12:49:00 PM
Your so creative with your words.. I LOVE
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Rachael Sanga
Date: 2/21/2018 3:57:00 AM
thanks
Date: 2/11/2018 9:27:00 AM
Nice build up...Lovely poem...All the best Rachael
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Rachael Sanga
Date: 2/17/2018 12:37:00 PM
thanks Arturo... I will do better I promise
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