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That Rainy Day

We walked down the vineyard, And you were close by my side, Without saying a single word, You slowly reached for my hand. For a moment we were both quiet, And the moment was so perfect. I looked up the pretty clear sky, And saw it become dark and cloudy, Suddenly I was filled with delight, When our hands found each other, It came to me that we were alone, And then you turned your face to mine, I swear I could have jumped a step back, When you leaned and your grip tightened, As you said “lets hurry it’s gonna rain.” I couldn’t believe it all just fade away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/20/2018 12:49:00 PM
Your so creative with your words.. I LOVE
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Rachael Sanga
Date: 2/21/2018 3:57:00 AM
thanks
Date: 2/11/2018 9:27:00 AM
Nice build up...Lovely poem...All the best Rachael
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Rachael Sanga
Date: 2/17/2018 12:37:00 PM
thanks Arturo... I will do better I promise

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