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That Pretty Young Stranger

It seems bloody retching but fatefully true
When somebody fetching is fatal for you
You flee from the danger but fractured you find
That pretty young stranger has captured your mind

Submitted to the Rithimus Divisa 7 Poetry Contest
From "Thru Maritime Miles"
Sponsored by Gregory R. Barden
September 29, 2020

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Date: 10/2/2020 9:56:00 AM
Great wisdom in rhyme along with subtle alliteration, Bryan! Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/3/2020 12:46:00 AM
Thank you Sam. I do try.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:34:00 AM
Ah, love! Nicely penned Bryan. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Bryan Norton
Date: 10/3/2020 12:45:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. Hope you read the full poem some day, if you wish. Take care

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