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That Pretty Young Stranger

It seems bloody retching but fatefully true When somebody fetching is fatal for you You flee from the danger but fractured you find That pretty young stranger has captured your mind Submitted to the Rithimus Divisa 7 Poetry Contest From "Thru Maritime Miles" Sponsored by Gregory R. Barden September 29, 2020

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Date: 10/2/2020 9:56:00 AM
Great wisdom in rhyme along with subtle alliteration, Bryan! Congratulations on your winning placement.
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BRYAN NORTON
Date: 10/3/2020 12:46:00 AM
Thank you Sam. I do try.
Date: 10/2/2020 6:34:00 AM
Ah, love! Nicely penned Bryan. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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BRYAN NORTON
Date: 10/3/2020 12:45:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. Hope you read the full poem some day, if you wish. Take care