That Old Field of Cotton

The old black man plowed the ground in that baking sun 
And sang all those old gospel songs 
The rows were straight as an arrow all through the field 
As I knew this was where his heart belongs 

He was just a share cropper and a mighty fine man 
And I never saw him angry or raging mad 
All I ever heard was the songs he was singing 
Plowing that mule in that field owned by my dad

He rested at the end of row number two 
And drank from the water jar I brought 
He nodded his satisfaction, then turned that mule around 
As old Julep did the best at what she was taught 

When he wasn’t plowing he and I sometime a go fishing 
As he’d always caught tenfold more than me 
He’d laugh when I shook my sweating head
And say while laughing, “it be’s what it be’s.”

Every year the old man would be seen in the old field 
It seemed to be twenty acres or more 
And his wife always waved as he neared their house 
As she rocked in the shade close to the front door 

One day he didn’t make it to the field to plow again 
And my heart was saddened to the core 
He had passed in the night into his final rest 
And I knew that those songs I would hear no more 

It’s been thirty years since I was down on the farm 
But I went back just yesterday 
The fields are all grown up, seems no one planted there 
And my heart was broken and I couldn’t stay 

I went back to the city back to the grit and grime 
But I think of those days long gone but not forgotten 
And I see the old man smiling as he’s out plowing 
And soon all that white in that big field of cotton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/6/2014 11:44:00 AM
Wonderful write. This can be classified as a "rhyme".
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