That Man

I am that man
Who's lived this life since it began
I am that man and I find it's true
That I'm responsible for what I do.

I am said man
The sum of my choices to God's plan
That manifests both lows and highs
Revealing there both truth and lies.

It is I indeed
Rest assured that it is in fact me
Whose path might sometimes take
The more scenic route by mistake.

I am that one
With many battles both lost and won
And, I know that I will lose one more
That day I stand before death's door.

I am the one
Who has to face the things I've done.
I am the one who will one day stand
Before my Maker by holy demand.

So, I am he
With no one else to blame but me
I hope that when I make that stand
I'm not ashamed to be that man.

                             
                         Timothy I. Brumley

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/26/2012 5:08:00 PM
Love this poem and to be blessed with a gift from God is truly a joy, Keep doing what you do. making people love to read your great work.
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Date: 1/26/2012 2:16:00 PM
A great poem to be featured. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:33:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. You have good descriptiveness and rhyming throughout this impressive entry.
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Date: 1/24/2012 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2011 11:43:00 AM
Your words on accountability are profound and wise. We sometimes throw caution to the wind and pay the price. Can I make a suggestion to your wonderful poem? Third stanza: use the second line as the first and then the second line could say: With eyes that sometimes never see" Hope I'm not being offensive but we share our ideas so well and I appreciate yours Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 9/10/2011 12:01:00 PM
That is a nice line, but then my rhyme scheme would alternate instead of coupling like it does now.
Date: 7/4/2010 10:52:00 AM
enjoyed reading today, happy fourth of July by the way!!
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Date: 5/25/2010 10:33:00 PM
I like the end especially, it ends good, well written.
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