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That Life Is Fleeting

A walk through the meadow is now out of the question, for I need no signs of death and shadow to remind me that life is fleeting. A walk through the meadow would not elevate my mood, or bring feelings of elation though, even in spring, I know that life is fleeting. A walk through the meadow would bring tears to my eyes as I would miss the thrashers, colors of the asters, and know that life is fleeting. A walk through the meadow must be reserved for uplifting thoughts, meditating on life, warmth, and no stark reminders that life is fleeting. Written October 6, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/8/2022 7:26:00 AM

I am loving my meadow in all seasons, and when I walk I chant, which uplifts my spirits immensely! I recommend chanting and drumming if you have a drum. Of course I do.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/8/2022 7:58:00 AM

I don't have a drum. I had one I brought back from Africa, but I don't know what happened to it. It must have gotten sold when we had an estate sale at the B&B.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/6/2022 7:05:00 PM

Seems as if the glass is half-empty for you today... Tomorrow will be better!! ~ Fill 'er up, please! ~ Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2022 9:22:00 PM

Nah, not really. Maybe I was just doing a bit of self-flagellation! (chuckling) But, I'll fill 'er up!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/6/2022 12:50:00 PM

We are reminded that we are not invincible, it is a sad realization. We must live our days like each one was our last. To enjoy as much as possible myfriend...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/6/2022 1:23:00 PM

Indeed, but, when you get to be my age, Michael, something about you doesn't want to be constantly reminded of it.