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That Indian Sweet Almond Tree

It stood magnificently in front of our Churchyard,
Like the sacred fig tree before any temple-yard;
My going to church, as a boy, had no other reason,
Than picking all bird-dropped fruits, as a mission;
Collecting as many as possible hastily,
Pushing them into my knickers-pocket quietly;
Thinking of them all through the Holy Mass,
Waiting for the priest to say the final grace;
Hurrying to a corner where no humans see,
Place, as lonely as the very loneliness could be;
Savouring the sour-sweet taste spread over it,
Then breaking it with stones to get the nuts in it;
Quantity of it equaled as little as a butter drip,
Or as much as ten mustard seeds put as a strip;
Relishing it as though nectar of ancient sages,
Coming down to mine tongue from all the ages;
In youth tastes changed and matters mattered,
And this almond became very old fashioned;
Burgers, Pizzas, hotdogs and all tasted well,
Though, consuming them, I often was unwell;
I saw boys and girls picking almonds as I did,
And hurrying to corners and I understood;
The ‘grown-up’ in me prohibited me from doing so,
It’s hence I hid my child within, as a rainbow;
Abroad, I almost forgot the Indian almond tree,
As within me, I was bored and never really free;
I had my worries of marriage and children,
Who’d care for a tree with no monetary gain?
It’s when I went to my home town casually,
It’s under that tree I found my future lily;
We married and got children who grew,
Both with tastes so modern and new;
Yet, it’s when once we visited the churchyard,
My younger lingered over that fruit so thrilled;
We offered him sweet almonds from stores,
And supermarkets that made him to uproar;
He collected for long as much as he could,
And each little one he collected for him he hid;
He too, later, had his dreams and worries,
Sophistications seismically so seduce, seize;
Church now demolished and grounds cleared,
For newer one to construct all well renewed;
I found this almond tree got fully uprooted,
And thrown into a corner like an old harp muted;
I cried and cried till I could cover the tears,
As though I’d hidden my feelings for many years…


30 July 2021
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Kauffman Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 11:12 AM
This amazing tree nourished you in life and now that it is "uprooted" it continues to nourish you with inspiration! Wonderfully written Chris. Congratulations on your win!
Agustin Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 9:29 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of a childhood "haven." God bless you.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. "Love It" This made me think about a book and a tree from many years ago. Too bad the tree had to go. I would have also cried. Have a blessed day with this win.
Carber Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 8:36 AM
You evoke so well a time long past, and the deep sadness of losing our glorious childhoods...congrats on your win!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Beautiful tribute to the churchyard and her compassionate almond tree "I had my worries of marriage and children, Who’d care for a tree with no monetary gain?" - I know that you did. Well earned win!
Mcintosh Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 5:59 PM
This is amazing. A light in the darkness. God bless you friend and Congrats on your win. Love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations, Dear Christuraj. I read your poem many times - and it's marvellous. The last part where the tree was uprooted made me almost tearful - I can understand how dear a tree could be, and how much impact childhood memories can have on a poetic soul. Best wishes ~ Mala
Sambourne Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful tribute to an almond tree which touched lives with nourishment of body + soul. Best wishes, Brian
Biswas Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 7:21 AM
It's marvellous. The last seven lines have the crux of the poem so beautifully written. Loved it! Congratulations on your win
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:49 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Thank you very much.
Kannan Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 11:03 PM
That's so sweet... I could recall the good old memories where we used to collect the fruits from our neighbor's almond tree.. Beautifully described... Though that tree was uprooted, I am sure it will be in your memories forever... Thanks for sharing this lovely poetry... Reads like a winner to me...
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you very much.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 9:05 PM
Delightful! Brought back old memories of climbing neem tree to pluck and eat it's fruit. When young, we would pick fallen ripe fruits from mud and eat. Now things have changed.
Alex Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 5:06 AM
Thank you very much for the comments.
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