That Indian Sweet Almond Tree

It stood magnificently in front of our Churchyard,
Like the sacred fig tree before any temple-yard;
My going to church, as a boy, had no other reason,
Than picking all bird-dropped fruits, as a mission;
Collecting as many as possible hastily,
Pushing them into my knickers-pocket quietly;
Thinking of them all through the Holy Mass,
Waiting for the priest to say the final grace;
Hurrying to a corner where no humans see,
Place, as lonely as the very loneliness could be;
Savouring the sour-sweet taste spread over it,
Then breaking it with stones to get the nuts in it;
Quantity of it equaled as little as a butter drip,
Or as much as ten mustard seeds put as a strip;
Relishing it as though nectar of ancient sages,
Coming down to mine tongue from all the ages;
In youth tastes changed and matters mattered,
And this almond became very old fashioned;
Burgers, Pizzas, hotdogs and all tasted well,
Though, consuming them, I often was unwell;
I saw boys and girls picking almonds as I did,
And hurrying to corners and I understood;
The ‘grown-up’ in me prohibited me from doing so,
It’s hence I hid my child within, as a rainbow;
Abroad, I almost forgot the Indian almond tree,
As within me, I was bored and never really free;
I had my worries of marriage and children,
Who’d care for a tree with no monetary gain?
It’s when I went to my home town casually,
It’s under that tree I found my future lily;
We married and got children who grew,
Both with tastes so modern and new;
Yet, it’s when once we visited the churchyard,
My younger lingered over that fruit so thrilled;
We offered him sweet almonds from stores,
And supermarkets that made him to uproar;
He collected for long as much as he could,
And each little one he collected for him he hid;
He too, later, had his dreams and worries,
Sophistications seismically so seduce, seize;
Church now demolished and grounds cleared,
For newer one to construct all well renewed;
I found this almond tree got fully uprooted,
And thrown into a corner like an old harp muted;
I cried and cried till I could cover the tears,
As though I’d hidden my feelings for many years…


30 July 2021
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Date: 8/5/2021 11:12:00 AM
This amazing tree nourished you in life and now that it is "uprooted" it continues to nourish you with inspiration! Wonderfully written Chris. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2021 9:29:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me nostalgic of a childhood "haven." God bless you.
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Date: 8/3/2021 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. "Love It" This made me think about a book and a tree from many years ago. Too bad the tree had to go. I would have also cried. Have a blessed day with this win.
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Date: 8/3/2021 8:36:00 AM
You evoke so well a time long past, and the deep sadness of losing our glorious childhoods...congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/3/2021 4:25:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to the churchyard and her compassionate almond tree "I had my worries of marriage and children, Who’d care for a tree with no monetary gain?" - I know that you did. Well earned win!
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Date: 8/2/2021 5:59:00 PM
This is amazing. A light in the darkness. God bless you friend and Congrats on your win. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/2/2021 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Christuraj. I read your poem many times - and it's marvellous. The last part where the tree was uprooted made me almost tearful - I can understand how dear a tree could be, and how much impact childhood memories can have on a poetic soul. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 8/2/2021 12:44:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to an almond tree which touched lives with nourishment of body + soul. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 8/2/2021 7:21:00 AM
It's marvellous. The last seven lines have the crux of the poem so beautifully written. Loved it! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 8/2/2021 10:49:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 8/2/2021 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 8/2/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/30/2021 11:03:00 PM
That's so sweet... I could recall the good old memories where we used to collect the fruits from our neighbor's almond tree.. Beautifully described... Though that tree was uprooted, I am sure it will be in your memories forever... Thanks for sharing this lovely poetry... Reads like a winner to me...
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Date: 7/31/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 7/30/2021 9:05:00 PM
Delightful! Brought back old memories of climbing neem tree to pluck and eat it's fruit. When young, we would pick fallen ripe fruits from mud and eat. Now things have changed.
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Date: 7/31/2021 5:06:00 AM
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