That First Kiss

lost in each other's minds unraveling at the seams ~ lips meet and bind By David Kavanagh

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Daniel Turner

Date: 4/12/2023 6:32:00 PM

My first kiss was a "how not to" lesson. Thank goodness she was a patient teacher:)

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/13/2023 9:45:00 AM

Ha! It’s always work in progress Daniel, but worth all the efforts and hard work, when you find that special one, cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 4/12/2023 9:39:00 AM

Looking forward to your follow up monoku David; the one where you walk round with a smile on your face, having a strange love thang going on in your stomach, being overly happy with the world and everyone in it, playing football and feeling absolutely great but then can't sleep at night and keep tossing and turning and can't concentrate on lessons then wondering why you go red when you meet up with her the next time and can't get your words out properly..Oh to be 31 again. :) Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/16/2023 4:17:00 AM

I’d no idea about Hazel, she’s a wonderful artist, I must check out online how she’s doing, you were years ahead of me dating at 11 years old, it was all about my schoolmates back then, girls hadn’t come along yet, but once they did I never looked back, thanks for enlightening me, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2023 10:47:00 AM

31 Gary, you were a late starter I was having these feelings at about 15, ah my Monoku was a success your comment is exactly the feelings and memories I was trying to evoke, like that song (Will You) by Hazel O’Connor does to me, every time I hear it, cheers David

Gary Radice
Date: 4/12/2023 10:28:00 AM

I forgot to add before I comment-bombed your monoku..Great work David :) PS..I was 11 :) Cheers - Gary EDIT: Re: Hazel O'connor.. I interviewed her for a webzine I once ran online..she was such a brilliant interviewee. Wonderful woman. .Sadly has recently suffered a brain injury so wishing her well. Cheers - Gary

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/12/2023 7:24:00 AM

That took me back David, I've never forgotten it. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2023 10:37:00 AM

Not many of us do forget Tom, for if we do, then it probably wasn’t the love of our lives, cheers David

David Mchattie

Date: 4/11/2023 4:48:00 PM

Takes me back. Stay well my friend.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/12/2023 12:44:00 AM

Good to see you David, perhaps a moment of innocence lost and a new overpowering force found, we’ve all been there, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/11/2023 4:06:00 PM

Such a kiss would either bind the seams or make me rip the garment off. This is kinda hot, Mr. K.

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/11/2023 4:38:00 PM

lol David. I went for it and loved it!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/11/2023 4:32:00 PM

Easy now girl! Oh what the hell it’s meant to be passionate and exploring all at once, go for it lol, cheers David