That Extra Mile

When you're forced to live on the street; you feel depressed, hungry, and beat, begging for coins and scraps to eat: while you're obliged to smile. People scoff, tossing you small change, labeling you as weird or strange, treating you like you had the mange: till each day's a trial. You beg strangers for a handout; seeking souls that won't scream and shout; imploring them to help you out; and go that extra mile. An angel sometimes smiles at you and offers up a coin or two, recognizing all you've been through: love shows, once in a while.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Emile, I like how you put yourself in that person's shoes and wrote from their perspective. An excellent write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 4:58 PM
Thanks, Kim, I'm honored by your words my friend, Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 3:03 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Charles' contest. Way to go. Sara
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 7:09 AM
Emile, CONGRATS on your win with this skillfully written, moving poem. Janice
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Thanks, Janice; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Messina Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 4:06 AM
Emile, this really touched me. Too many people judge others by their covers- not fair and not right. Great write, my friend. Congratulations on your top win! Charlie
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Thanks, Charles; I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend; Emile.
Seeker Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Revisited this masterpiece today. Beautifully penned, Emile
Pinet Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Thanks, Unseeking; as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
Roper Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 10:27 PM
Sometimes it's hard to see. There is a lady that has been at our park for almost two years living out of her car. She stays there because of the bathrooms that are open 24-7. I've given her food, shoes & socks, books to read. She has family close , but they don't help her.
Pinet Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Thanks, Eve; the world needs more people like you, my friend, Emile.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Hello Emile, yes you are right. The homeless people have a rough life. People do give small change. I saw a woman helping a homeless person. She treated him to a meal. that does not happen to often. My friend. Enjoy your evening.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 4:17 AM
Hello Emile, Your welcome my friend. My friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene\
Pinet Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Thanks, Darlene; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.
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