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That Eerie Feeling

I sat at my desk, just typing away The snow was falling, throughout the whole day. There was no one home, just me and my pet This eerie feeling, the chills I did get. I swear I heard steps, above in the hall I stood really still, and shouted a call. The cat came walking, for he was quite near What I was hearing, it wasn’t that clear. It seemed to be close, right above my head In my son’s bedroom, and right by his bed. What was I hearing, up moving about? Should I go and see, or get the heck out? I snuck up the stairs, and tried to be brave I looked all about, no signs had they gave. Okay I was scared, for my house is old. Entering the room, it felt rather cold. So I went back down, and began to type I heard it again, I knew I was right. So I grabbed my purse, and walked out the door I needed to go, get milk at the store. Upon my return, my daughter was there I heard it again, and I told her where. “Mother” she had said, and rather aloof That’s snow falling off, of our high-pitched roof. I wasn’t convinced, and felt really dumb Not sure she was right, I still was quite numb. Your eyes can play tricks, and your ears can too Watch for the shadow, that brushes by you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/20/2010 3:01:00 AM
Enjoyed your story very much, Kelly. Congratulations on yor win in John's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations Kelly on your well deserved win in John Heck's contest "Edge". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congrats Kelly on your winning poem in John's Edge contest with this marvelous creation.. enjoy your victory.. with luv..
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Date: 2/27/2010 5:41:00 PM
Hey Kelly, My congratulations on your win in the contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/27/2010 4:57:00 PM
Kelly, thanks for supporting my contest with this porm. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:59:00 PM
eerie ! well witten,Kelly! Congratulations to you.-Robert
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:30:00 AM
This was a compelling poem, Kelly. Love that last line. Congratulations on your success in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Kelly on your winning poem in Moses contest ... an amazing write and wonderful win..enjoy this victory..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:29:00 AM
I want to Thank you, graciously, for supporting my contest. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry with us all here at PoetrySoup this beautiful Sunday morning. Hope to see your poetry posted here for many years to come Kelly. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:14:00 AM
Excellent rhyme, Kelly! Great imagery and flow! And the eyes do play tricks on you just as the ears do at times! Peace and love, Audrey Thank you for your kind comments on my poem, Kelly! Hope you're well.
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Date: 1/16/2010 7:50:00 AM
Wonderful rhyme and a lovely little story Kelly. I could see your every move >> if you want to write a blog, go to your member and you can write a blog from there. To Soup Mail, just click on the Soup Bowl every single time, and thi will open up a new Soup Mail every time >> have a great weekend >> James
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