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That Day My Whacky Words Dried Up

Never say never I was still laughing, still having a blast giving my two cents on what’s hip and what’s not little did I know it’s so not me that’s definitely not my calling… Wearing my hat half skew on my head jeans so baggy I almost tripped thinking I look so fly only thing missing was my rhymes “whasup my peeps!! how’s things rolling?” silly me! Should have seen those quizzical expressions as if to say, err what the hell or who the hell are you trying to be silly me! thinking to myself… What to say next when you silence a room? earth open up and swallow me whole it happened that day my whacky words dried up!!

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Date: 6/22/2010 9:12:00 PM
Lol, wow, love this fun write:)
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:26:00 PM
I enjoyed the images and humor in the poem
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Date: 6/22/2010 12:55:00 PM
It is ruff when we are left speechless when we need just the precise answer..Jesus never had that problem and I believe the closer that we get the more help we can have in that area...I like the way you think(the comment that you made on my Limerick)...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2010 12:25:00 PM
funny, I had that effect one day for another reason...it was a bad day.
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Date: 6/22/2010 10:31:00 AM
Been there and done that, Wilma. Brought a smile to my face as I pictured you screwing your hat on. Keep up the good work. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/22/2010 8:08:00 AM
This is very excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. The images are quite hilarious. This could be the beginning of a comic strip. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:43:00 AM
LOLLLLLLL! You having me almost laughing myself right out of my chair! : ) "thinking to myself.../ What to say next when you silence a room?/ earth open up and swallow me whole/..."
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Date: 6/22/2010 7:16:00 AM
lol....great write Wilma......Larry
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