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That Cursor

Taking those photos Sunrises, sunsets Beautiful nature What sights to see Download very soon On the computer Where they flash across The screen surprise me Just like I am there This morning sunrise Flashed across the screen But there that bright dot Morning star shinning I don't remember Taking that picture Early morning dark Half-asleep_distance Let me get closer No glasses _sleepy eyes Close enough now That isn't morning star It is just that mouse That mouse cursor Pretending to be star....

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Date: 9/14/2010 1:11:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my poetry. this poem of yours is so sweet and wonderful, that bad cursor trying to imitate a star.. just enchanting.. constance
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Date: 9/14/2010 9:49:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Sara. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2010 8:05:00 AM
You are, as am I, a victim of the boob tube. Ah, but aint it fun? Love, Dave
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Date: 9/13/2010 6:32:00 PM
I agree w/Doris! jimbo
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Date: 9/13/2010 3:35:00 PM
funny mom!
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Date: 9/13/2010 1:06:00 PM
Another lovely piece Sara.. your pen is surely gifted ... enjoyed this free verse very much.. your descriptions are so perfect luv..
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Date: 9/13/2010 11:21:00 AM
lol, cute one
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