Krish Radhakrishna Poet Limerick

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5/July/2025

Summer Limerick contest

 

That bite of that cake

I know her well, and she knows me too well,
the way we two talk, the whole town can tell,
ten years wed, fire she spits,
drives me crazy, out of wits, 
how wedding cakes can change heaven to hell!

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Darlene De Beaulieu August 28, 2025 at 2:41 PM Hello Krish, yes some weddings do end too soon. Some last a life time. blessings my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu August 29, 2025 at 10:43 AM Hello Krish, For those people i feel very sad for their wedding to be a short one. blessing my friend. Hugs. /Darlene/ Krish Radhakrishna August 28, 2025 at 11:59 PM Thanks Very much Darlene! Yes, you are right!!

Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2025 at 9:28 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your fun "That bite of that cake" write again. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win............. Krish Radhakrishna July 21, 2025 at 2:49 AM Thanks Paula! Much appreciated!:)

Linda Alice Fowler July 14, 2025 at 8:25 AM Cute one Krish. Congratulations! :) Krish Radhakrishna July 14, 2025 at 2:48 PM Thanks Linda!!:)

Tania Kitchin July 13, 2025 at 2:31 PM Krish, congratulations on your winning placement with your witty and funny limerick. Krish Radhakrishna July 14, 2025 at 2:49 PM Thanks Tania! Your contests are always fun!:)

Crystol Woods July 13, 2025 at 12:07 PM Congratulations on your win! Xo Krish Radhakrishna July 14, 2025 at 2:50 PM Thanks Crystal!!:)

Paula Goldsmith July 6, 2025 at 8:15 AM I enjoyed reading your fun "That bite of that cake" Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away............ Krish Radhakrishna July 14, 2025 at 2:48 PM Thanks Paula!!