That bite of that cake

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5/July/2025

Summer Limerick contest

I know her well, and she knows me too well, the way we two talk, the whole town can tell, ten years wed, fire she spits, drives me crazy, out of wits, how wedding cakes can change heaven to hell!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2025 9:28:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your fun "That bite of that cake" write again. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your win.............

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/21/2025 2:49:00 AM

Thanks Paula! Much appreciated!:)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/14/2025 8:25:00 AM

Cute one Krish. Congratulations! :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/14/2025 2:48:00 PM

Thanks Linda!!:)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/13/2025 2:31:00 PM

Krish, congratulations on your winning placement with your witty and funny limerick.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/14/2025 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Tania! Your contests are always fun!:)

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/13/2025 12:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Xo

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/14/2025 2:50:00 PM

Thanks Crystal!!:)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/6/2025 8:15:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "That bite of that cake" Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away............

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/14/2025 2:48:00 PM

Thanks Paula!!