That Beautiful Mane and Her Pretty Dress

That Beautiful Mane And Her Pretty Dress


Should a poet grab on and celebrate
A bit of poesy or her virgin kiss
Finding her was it purest luck or fate
O' lord her soft smile this man sure does miss
And our weekend trek through to rolling hills
That cool breeze begging us ever onward
"Those tempting June nights full of golden thrills".

That beautiful mane and her pretty dress
The pure delight in her ravishing eyes
Our picnic that day became a sad mess
But deep was the love that so strongly ties.

I shall never forget when she gave in
Gave up the wonderful treasure to me
In youth we cared not about any sin
We were happy-go lucky and carefree.

Robert Lindley,  6-1- 2023
Sonnet 

Note-
She was so sexy and just so beautiful, 
We split because she went back to Hawaii 
to go to college. She was a definite keeper but  
life got in the way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Pandit Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 7:52 AM
Romance echoes through your beautiful vocabulary, Robert: O' lord her soft smile this man sure does miss And our weekend trek through to rolling hills That cool breeze begging us ever onward Those tempting June night full of golden thrills... A FAVE for this splendid write.
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Theraven Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 9:00 PM
Robert, No truer love, no deeper devotion than those in life's memories made. -Richard
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Baker Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 2:28 PM
A beautiful memory of life and love in youth, Robert. Thanks for sharing it with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Cunningham Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 1:37 PM
Happy memories Robert but it wasn't to be, we never forget our early romances. Tom
Lindley Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Romios Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Robert, this masterpiece touched me so. From the beginning to end! Youth, passion, love that we desired but slipped through our fingers. Years later, she still is with you in a poetic sense. A fabulous sonnet, a fave from me, Thank you for being consistent in our friendship. You make life a joy. Panagiota with hugs. Xx
Lindley Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Thank you my friend, Ah yes, youth he merest remembrance of brings a pleasant smile. Also interesting subject to compose to. God bless.
Lindley Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 12:03 PM
I begged, I do mean begged her to stay stateside and attend her college but the answer was no. I always told here that with her beauty she could be in the movies. A terrible loss that affected me for years since I truly loved her.
Lindley Avatar
June 2, 2023 at 12:06 PM
She sent me a Christmas card that year-saying- wish you were here. Consider moving there but it was too late as I had already found another beautiful lady to pass time with. Youth -ain't it "amazing"
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