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That Beautiful Mane and Her Pretty Dress

That Beautiful Mane And Her Pretty Dress Should a poet grab on and celebrate A bit of poesy or her virgin kiss Finding her was it purest luck or fate O' lord her soft smile this man sure does miss And our weekend trek through to rolling hills That cool breeze begging us ever onward "Those tempting June nights full of golden thrills". That beautiful mane and her pretty dress The pure delight in her ravishing eyes Our picnic that day became a sad mess But deep was the love that so strongly ties. I shall never forget when she gave in Gave up the wonderful treasure to me In youth we cared not about any sin We were happy-go lucky and carefree. Robert Lindley, 6-1- 2023 Sonnet Note- She was so sexy and just so beautiful, We split because she went back to Hawaii to go to college. She was a definite keeper but life got in the way.

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Date: 6/8/2023 7:52:00 AM
Romance echoes through your beautiful vocabulary, Robert: O' lord her soft smile this man sure does miss And our weekend trek through to rolling hills That cool breeze begging us ever onward Those tempting June night full of golden thrills... A FAVE for this splendid write.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/20/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Date: 6/4/2023 9:00:00 PM
Robert, No truer love, no deeper devotion than those in life's memories made. -Richard
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/20/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Date: 6/2/2023 2:28:00 PM
A beautiful memory of life and love in youth, Robert. Thanks for sharing it with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/20/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Date: 6/2/2023 1:37:00 PM
Happy memories Robert but it wasn't to be, we never forget our early romances. Tom
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/20/2023 8:11:00 AM
Thank you, my good friend. This was born from a cherished memory. God bless.
Date: 6/2/2023 12:22:00 PM
Robert, this masterpiece touched me so. From the beginning to end! Youth, passion, love that we desired but slipped through our fingers. Years later, she still is with you in a poetic sense. A fabulous sonnet, a fave from me, Thank you for being consistent in our friendship. You make life a joy. Panagiota with hugs. Xx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/8/2023 10:09:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Ah yes, youth he merest remembrance of brings a pleasant smile. Also interesting subject to compose to. God bless.
Date: 6/2/2023 12:03:00 PM
I begged, I do mean begged her to stay stateside and attend her college but the answer was no. I always told here that with her beauty she could be in the movies. A terrible loss that affected me for years since I truly loved her.
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Date: 6/2/2023 12:06:00 PM
She sent me a Christmas card that year-saying- wish you were here. Consider moving there but it was too late as I had already found another beautiful lady to pass time with. Youth -ain't it "amazing"

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