Thanksgiving

T houghtfully open heart in thankfulness
H onoring God for graciousness, unlimited access

A nd remeber all things in appreciativeness
N ot forgetting air we breath, blue sky we have in excess

K nights and princesses; children of the Living God
S ing a joyful song praising Him don't put on grand facade

G ive of yourself in thanks and rejoice in His love
I nvite the Holy Spirit to dwell within your heart dove

V ictory can be yours each step of the way my friend
I f time in God's presence in praise and worship daily spend

N ow is the time in His presence and purpose to remain
G ratitude said for all of life's pleasures even life's pain.


S tillness and quiet each day spend time thank God for each and everyone

This is a combination Acrostic and couplets..
My understanding that Acrostics do not rhyme but mine is actually couplets written in poulter's measure..A person who sold eggs would sometimes give a dozen eggs for a price and sometimes if the hens were laying extra good a person would get 14 eggs of the same price..Lucky them..So 12/14 in rhyming couplets..

Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Contest: Count Your Blessings
Date Written: Monday, November 19, 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Congrats on your win in Kim's "Count Your Blessings" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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December 3, 2012 at 4:05 AM
This is lovely! Congrats on your win!
Johnson Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 9:19 PM
Great poem and great win, Sara. I would think an acrostic could be written in any form that can handle the number of lines. Congratulations. Love, joyce
A   Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:41 PM
Sara, congratulations with your beautiful winning poem, in Kim's "Counting Your Blessings" take care :-) always~ PD
Carrillo Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:28 PM
This is beautiful Sars. I just loved it. Congratulations. Many blessings. Lucilla
Guzzi Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 6:33 PM
I see no reason you should do this Sarah and you did it so well! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 12:54 PM
Congratulations once again Sara, well deserved xx
Roberts Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 11:10 AM
congrats Sara .....Seren
Macfarlane Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Wonderful and uplifting write Sara....congrats on your win! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:55 AM
I really enjoyed your poem, congrats.
Merryman Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:51 AM
Sara, wonderful words of truth in a unique format. My favorite line is "Knights and princesses; children of the Living God" Congrats on your win in my contest! Love, Kim
May Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 8:21 AM
congrats on a great win Sara
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 11:01 PM
Sara, this is a lovely poem. I see you have a strong faith in God and His goodness. I do too. :) Thanks for your comment on my poem; I agree with all you said in light of "forgive as He has forgiven us". Been reading your poetry. Lovely images! Hugs!
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November 22, 2012 at 8:41 AM
wow, you combined a lot of techniques in this one, SAra. A very well crafted poem. I enjoyed seeing it. Sorry it took me so long. I have been so busy and I need to start cooking in 20 min. but I still have many poets to see before that. Wish me LUCK.
A   Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 9:38 PM
Sara,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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November 21, 2012 at 7:57 PM
beautiful combination Sara, thank you for reminding me in soup mail, I appreciate it a lot :D and now I fell into the beauty of your acrostic poem, this is really colored my day, happy belated thanksgiving :D - hug, yanny
Horne Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 2:10 PM
beautiful acrostic couplets, Sara - a sure winner here. Interesting info about poulterers' dozens - we say bakers' dozen for 13 (they don't give 13 instead of 12 nowadays, though, lol)
Horsman Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 10:25 AM
your logic is amazing Sara, so is your sense of humour and your wonderful poetry...
Beaufort Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 10:14 AM
Sara, you set the record straight. I am always in awe. In appreciating all things, I am reminding myself that you are a treasure and your faith is an inspiration.
Onclaud Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 12:24 PM
looking forward to seeing this unravel, sara... happy holiday with love and huggs!.. turkey??.. smile!
Beaufort Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 11:04 AM
No wait--I think this is just fine as is. You could leave it like this. What is there in this life that can ever be considered complete anyway? This is very deep!
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 6:46 PM
oh dang! you were gonna be my last one to read as I go off, but I can at least say BYE BYE
Beaufort Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Please see my comment on Sara Kendrick's "Thanksgiving".
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