Thanks For Calling Me Mom

I saw her sitting alone at the table
Forlorn, and not expecting any company
Up to her I quickly walked and greeted her
With a gentle hug and tender kiss on the cheek
Momentarily her eyes lit up with fleeting recognition

Then just like that,she turned away
Recognition gone again but I refused to
Give up and so I took her gnarled hand in mine
Kissed it softly,leaned in closely and said"Hi Mom"
For a moment tears welled up in her eyes and she thanked me

"For what?" I asked and she said quietly
"Thanks for calling me Mom" and I said"Well
You are my mom and always will be"and she smiled
At me but then once more turned her head away from me
So I began to sing along to the Christmas music they were playing

I was hoping she would join in but
She merely sneaked sideways peeks at me
Trying with all her might to figure out just who I was
My heart was breaking inside of me but I didn't let her know
At eighty eight I figured she had earned the right of memory loss

Forget all the bad years she had spent
Defending and fending off an alcoholic husband
Protecting her adopted children she loved,from abuse
Pretending to everyone things were fine in our troubled home
As I watched her lovely,dear,wrinkled face,I recalled another time

I was in a class play and she attended alone
My father too drunk to come and watch me perform
As I came off stage there she was,so proud of me I knew
I said"Thanks Mom for coming to watch me in my acting debut"
She told me I'd done a good job and that she was glad to call me daughter

Beaming she said "And thanks for calling me Mom"
"You will always be my mom"I said and then we hugged
Now this was one memory I wished with all my soul that she still had
But I knew that ship had sailed and so I rose to leave and said"Bye Mom"
She looked me over then again said "Thanks for calling me Mom"as my heart did a flip







**for contest "My Parent"
sponsored by Francine Roberts
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Merryman Avatar
April 6, 2012 at 11:55 AM
A lovely tribute to your mother, Deb. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 6:46 AM
A belated congratulations to you for your win in P.D's "Mothers day" contest Deb. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 11:23 PM
So very sad Deb, but it held my interest. I did so hope she would recognize you. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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April 3, 2012 at 9:59 PM
DEB, Congratulations with your beautiful and heart touching mother'' poem. thank you for supporting my contest*. Have yourself a good night. It was an honor having your poem in my contest, luv~PD
Taylor Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Outstanding piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in the "My Parent" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Beck Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 7:54 AM
the only word for this poem is "beautiful" ...... many congratulations on your win, Deb
Duffin Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Hi Deb. . Congratulations on your result in the contest with this great piece. A thoroughly deserved success. Such a sad, sad piece. We play in Old Folks homes so I know what you mean about fleeting recognition. Sometimes as we sing the old songs I see a spark flicker and die in the eyes. How long that moment is we will never know. Like with your Mom, be happy that you still light that tiny fire, laid with love in the past. Good luck to you. Eamon
Mehta Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Francine, deb
Onclaud Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 3:43 AM
definitely well-deserved… big hurrah! :) nette
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January 3, 2011 at 9:15 PM
So sad to read this, Deb. It's so true, our mother will always be the best, this poem reminds us not to forget our dear mother, to give her time of caring and attention when she needed us most. Congratulations on your well deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
Mannan Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 8:24 PM
This is a wonderful write Deb.many congratulations for this super win.
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January 3, 2011 at 7:46 PM
such a lovely, gifted-emotional pen you have Deb! Congrats on this well deserved win! Lay
Johnson Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Absolute beautiful story of love and loss. Congratulations, Deb. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:44 PM
What a wonderful poem of love, Deb!! Congratulations on a well deserving win!! Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Congrats Deb on your success in My Parent contest with this awesome entry and write my friend... enjoy another top ten victory tonight with luv..
Roberts Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:30 PM
congrats on your second place win in my contest Deb, this was a beautiful touching poem that made me teary eyed
Kendrick Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Good one..So filled with powerful emotion..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your mother is a very special person..Too bad that she did not leave the man and forge a better life for all the children and herself..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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December 30, 2010 at 6:45 PM
An extremely tender and touching write Deb .. should be right up there in the top of the winners circle..my friend.. good luck with luv..
A   Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:29 PM
A wonderful poem Deb,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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