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I laughed even though I didn’t get it I cried even though I wasn’t touched I smiled simply because she smiled at me I pretended to like his cooking a bit too much. I agreed even though they were wrong I said, “Glad to see you”, even though I was not I clapped even though it wasn’t entertaining I complimented her kid who was a real snot. I listened to a horrible singer I said I remembered a complete stranger I blushed even though I wasn’t embarrassed I showed fear when there was no real danger. I guessed thirty-six when I knew she was fifty I lost even though I could have won I liked the present I didn’t have a use for I took many when I didn’t even want one. So I empathize with all of you readers Who struggle with reading my poems Pretending that they are real clever When I know for a fact you are wrong. I thank you for all of your compliments Positive feedback and the high praise Your lies, they mean so much to me I’ll do the same for you one of these days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/27/2012 6:03:00 PM
If everyone said what they were really thinking, there would be a lot of angry and hurt people......it is an honor to read your poetry Joe (smiles)
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Date: 5/19/2011 1:12:00 PM
I'd send you praises for your poems but you know that I would lie I'll keep on reading what you write But I really don't know why Mike
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Date: 4/11/2011 11:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Joeeg. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on our poem being featured this week Joe. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Joe
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:29:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great one to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u are doing well ..miss u much...
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Date: 8/17/2010 6:39:00 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Joe. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:41:00 AM
Many congratulations Joe on your win in Carol's fine contest >> James
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Date: 8/5/2010 6:23:00 PM
Dear Joe I notice that you and I are pretty even in the contests. Often side by side, sometimes higher and sometimes lower. So I guess everything you said about yours you could say about mine. Congratulations on your 7th place tie with me. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, Joe
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations Joe, on your success in Carol's awesome contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:23:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this excellent write and super win for u today.. enjoy another momentous victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2010 4:06:00 PM
Oh and I almost forgot 'Welcome to the Soup' and 'Your welcome'
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Date: 4/23/2010 4:00:00 PM
My name's Destiny and I really do love your poem whether you believe it or not...and I can relate I've wondered several times if they really wrote what they thought, but I figure I don't take the time to lie so why would they, right? Anyways...I love this poem and many of your others...I can tell it comes from the heart...Keep up the great work and I hope to read some more soon. -Destiny
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Date: 4/23/2010 1:27:00 PM
Hello Joe nice to meet you. You can select Bio as the form for this poem as it is about you or Free Verse. If I tell you something about a poem of yours you can believe it because if I don't like it I won't leave a comment at all. Now that is not to say someone else won't love it. We all have our own feelings on poems we read. I loved this one. It made my day brighter. Please keep writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2010 1:13:00 PM
Haha I like this. Anyways, yeah this is easy to relate to sometimes I feel the same way but I'm not so sure all people here say things they don't mean, as I don't--not here anyways.
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