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Thankful Streams of Thought

As they leave for unknown prevent places The shores of uncertainty slowly encroach Shadows of war apprehend and approach I am thankful for their fearless fervid faces && Besieged by battle, staggering with hunger && && Tyrannical turbulent seas wave after wave && &&&&&&&&&& I am thankful for the bonding bowing brave &&&&&&&&&& && Before the tearful hearts begin to slumber && && && && In their abrupt absence, we yieldingly yearn && && For once they came from a warmful womb && && Not to be captured by their tenebrous tomb && {@@@@@} I am thankful for their safe and rapid return. {@@@@@} We are truly thankful... Nov.11.2018 Thankful Poetry Enclosed Rhyme Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Placed 6'th

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Date: 12/7/2018 5:29:00 PM
Such a touching poem and a great tribute, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2018 10:53:00 AM
Oh, this is so meaningful, WW. I can't imagine what it is like to send a child off to war, only to worry until they return. How beautifully written! Congratulations, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/6/2018 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations my friend, on this win. Your thoughts truly touch my heart. Love and thankfulness. ~ Brandy
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Date: 12/6/2018 8:31:00 PM
WW, I enjoyed this well written tribute poem honoring our war hero's, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 11/20/2018 7:49:00 AM
Wonderful friend, ^WW^, you have touched my heart to the very core with this write. As a Vietnam Vet, I can look back at previous wars and look ahead to the wars we are presently in and see the very essence of God's Mighty Arm as it has stretched over the centuries it has taken to build this great nation called America and I am proud to be an American. All Honor and Praise to God the Father and His Son Jesus Christ.
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Date: 11/17/2018 6:20:00 PM
What a touching piece. Glad I discovered you here. Your work is thoughtful and full of emotion.
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Date: 11/15/2018 10:19:00 AM
What a classy tribute to true heroes. Inspirational! ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/12/2018 8:58:00 PM
Excellent tribute to our hero's, WW Another gem from your great mind. Love & hero's ~Charlie
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Date: 11/12/2018 12:52:00 AM
Excellent tribute. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/11/2018 6:16:00 PM
Always praying for those that risk their lives- so that we might be free. The heart grieves along with the families that have lost a loved one- because of War. I am thankful as well, my friend- for those that return home safely. Love and Peace. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/11/2018 3:35:00 PM
Wonderful tribute, W.W, power to all you write, it is so beautiful...
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Date: 11/11/2018 3:03:00 PM
"The shores of uncertainty slowly encroach; Shadows of war apprehend and approach" - well done, and so appropriate today. The crosses were a magnificent touch, WW.
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Date: 11/11/2018 2:02:00 PM
Wonderfully written tribute!...love the art work too :) We all need to be thankful for the "Cost" of freedom.
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