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Thank You Walt Whitman

thank you Walt Whitman oh you foolish ones bordering on change of life standing still for a moment before full manhood embraces how brave and daring strident, filled with never ending life; brash colts with tricks and shameless lures for pretty young things. exquisite in your urges to hold on keep childish freedom safe tucked beneath a wishful heart in that summer, that blissful summer came a roar, a grinding metallic clack shatters down the hills with siren sounds heard only in melodious tones by boys about to burst from youth seasons change, our autumn reaps in radiant red all of those peach-fuzzed near men gone to strange places far from us this fall harvest takes it never feeds but grief and loss as triangle folded flags fill arms and blue black rifles air their song. I still hear your laughter full throated fiercely joyous bite into winter wind and echo down the canyon wall.

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Date: 10/18/2017 2:23:00 PM
Rather sad and tragic...but beautifully written nevertheless. Walt would have approved, Patricia! My very warmest regards - in affection! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/18/2017 3:09:00 PM
John was is such a waste of beautiful youth. Thank you.
Date: 10/18/2017 6:37:00 AM
A wonderful tribute Patricia, this is very well written..I like the seasons change stanza..
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/18/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 10/17/2017 2:49:00 AM
O me! O Life! That was a wonderful tribute Patricia, soooooo well written, I am jealous (not really, just awed) Oh boy, you're an accomplished poet. Thank you :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 10/17/2017 4:08:00 PM
I had read something written by Walt Whitman and it touched me very deeply and so I wrote this poem to thank him for awakening my mind. I know he is dead but I figure he can still read. Thank you Darren, for bring new things into my life,

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