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Thank You, Thanks

Many, many years ago I was given a wonderful gift,
it is very precious and I will consider it a treasure forever;
            it was a Lifetime Membership for Poetry Soup,
imagine my joy and my gratitude at this anonymous present.

      I can tell you-   that it has changed me in fathomless ways,
with this gift I have learned how to write my poetry;
            this is the best writing school ever and I am growing,
this anonymous person knew that I had potential.

      Writing in the sand thank you is just not enough,
writing in the sky is nothing for my gratitude is so great;
            the only way I can repay this selfless act is to give,
and to grow as a poet and show that this gift was not wasted.

      I will admit to you that in time, I knew my benefactor,
this angel who now resides above-  a true angel;
            one day we will meet at Heaven's golden gateway,
and then I can hug her and kiss her and say thank you, thanks

                            for changing my life . . . 

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April 27, 2018


Poetry/Verse/Thank you, Thanks
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1017-381-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.



Written for the contest, Anonymous Angels
sponsor, Yazmin Malik

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Donnelly Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 11:47 PM
I think the best way we can honour a gift from someone is to show sincere appreciation for the soul who's so generous of heart, as well as the gift given. Your poem does all of this and more, besides your pursuance of making the most of the gift. Beautiful tribute, Broken Wings. Congrats on your win. All the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
Roper Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:36 AM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win. hugs
Haight Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 9:06 AM
Such a lovely tribute of thanks for your wonderful lifetime gift that provided joy for you as a poetess and for others who read your poems. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:54 PM
A most touching and heartwarming poem, BW. Congrats on your most deserved win.
Gentry Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing story and amazing gift. Your gratitude shows in your actions, your writings. Your poems.
Wanter Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:23 PM
So, so touching and well written, of course, as you can do.
Faulkner Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 1:21 PM
What a lovely and touching tribute - I also had someone purchase me a premium membership - hopefully one day I will know who it was so I may thank them properly - I'm sure your benefactor is smiling on you-
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