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A thallosophile is one who loves the sea. Pronounced “ta-lass-o-file.”

sage (archaic) - grave

Thallosophile

“over the waters blue the night winds sigh,
the breakers roar…”
—Lord Byron

Thallosophile, my lass, listen to me.
Emergent, I do wade in your blue depths,
where subfluvial eyes view your splendour
and I’m jealous, as glow of moon directs.

Northeasterly, your locks of golden sand.
The land breeze blows in mystic sweeps, as I
let go my strength, my will; succumb to you.
In sighs, I’m trapped…your bod’, my map and more.

Entwined with breaker’s score, dear lass, hear me.
Amidst its deafening, your back to me.
My tongue will surge, give a reprise, and shock.
The ghostly moon, a shadow cast, halts me.

The turquoise gown, its ebb, its undertow.
You had me at “hello.” No need to drown.
You begged me, follow you, into your sage.
The wind, pleased by perseverance, ghosts me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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La France Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest, like your poem, and the chosen quote, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 11:44 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/creative "Thallosophile" write. Thanks for the note on the top. What a wonderful ending... Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
Hind Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 7:39 PM
Such a haunting poem, Kim, I loved your imagery, and diction...was powerful longing shared here, breathtaking- <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Thank you! xx
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 5:46 AM
Creative and descriptive work. Thanks for sharing. Sara K..Keep on writing
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 5:54 AM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Rigoler Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 4:49 AM
This is excellent, Kim, giving personification to the sea. Love your marine vocab too! / Maurice
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 5:54 AM
Thank you so much, Maurice!
Greenhough Avatar
May 28, 2024 at 11:37 PM
I greatly admire your talent in your poem. The words were so descriptive of the sea that I could feel the roll of waves. I also liked how you brought back some of the archaic words which are sad to lose.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2024 at 5:55 AM
Thank you, Hilda!
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