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TGIF - The First Time

Half-drowned from another cloudburst His life seemed to be at its worst He opened his eyes And with great surprise Robinson Crusoe said it first! *TGIF=Thank God its Friday

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Date: 9/11/2020 6:26:00 PM
G’day Rico … I think that statement and R.C. both got it right. A great play on words again Rico - witty indeed - Lindsay
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/12/2020 9:31:00 AM
Not compared to what YOU write! Aloha! Rico
Date: 9/11/2020 5:52:00 PM
At least he didn't say "Oh, my Gawd!"
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/12/2020 9:31:00 AM
I suspect all he could think about was Friday! Aloha! Rico
Date: 9/11/2020 5:06:00 PM
this is hilarious, rico! thanks for the grin...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/12/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene. I'll try for a laugh tomorrow! Aloha! Rico
Date: 9/11/2020 2:33:00 PM
love the word play Rico!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/12/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting, Jan! Aloha! Rico
Date: 9/11/2020 11:44:00 AM
Robinson Crusoe certainly knew how to face adversity, Rico. Ironically, today is the 19th anniversary of the World Trade Center disaster. It was a time when many questioned their faith. Very well penned, Rico! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/11/2020 12:02:00 PM
Aye, but would he have survived without Friday? Aloha! Rico
Date: 9/11/2020 11:32:00 AM
Lol. One day he’ll find it first Rico, kelli
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