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Handicraft supplies in basket on burlap background

Textures Burlap and satin, old age and youth, that’s probably backwards to tell the truth. Cause something that’s satin, is easily cut. While hide of pure burlap is tested and tough. Burlap and satin, old age and youth, a rigid garment and something that’s smooth. Shining and snagging with rugged touch not giving out warmth very much. Burlap and satin, one up one down, bulging potato sack, a sleek evening gown. One’s not for the moment and one is hot. We make the best of what we’ve got. Satin and burlap, youth and old age years of life give birth to a sage. Burlap keeps strong the things that it holds, precious loved ones and moments of gold.

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Date: 4/3/2018 10:29:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 3/31/2018 12:28:00 PM
Wow! I really like this. Congratulations on your win. A lot of wisdom in this.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 3/31/2018 5:50:00 AM
Wow, I like your poem. The strength of it and the strength of Hessian cloth. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:54:00 PM
I learned something new today. Thanks Kai.
Date: 3/30/2018 9:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Blessings to you on this Resurrection Season.
Date: 3/30/2018 9:16:00 PM
Lovely expression with the burlap and Satin ... Congratulations on your well deserved win ... Love the poem ...
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Probir.
Date: 3/30/2018 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Sian. beautifully done.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Line,
Date: 3/30/2018 5:36:00 PM
I love the comparison you had made !! I like this very much, Sian!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:55:00 PM
Good to hear from you Carrie. Blessings, Janis.
Date: 3/30/2018 4:16:00 PM
Love this!!! Congrats!!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Kitty.
Date: 3/30/2018 4:14:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Sian, with so much wisdom. I love the way you used the 'burlap and satin' theme to weave the textures and strength in comparing old age and youth. Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 3/31/2018 12:56:00 PM
You know I understand the burlap years and miss the satin days. Thanks Sandra.

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