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Tethered To a Moment

The chance was there—then quickly snatched away, but that moment became the reason she sustained hope. Her captor had failed to lock the cellar door one day. The key would turn moments later, but she wouldn’t mope. Knowing he might forget again would help her cope. Before her fitful sleep each night, she smiled about that moment, his brief lapse, and felt there would yet be the perfect chance to embrace freedom with a shout, when once again this devil would fail to turn that key and this time walk away. Then no more his evil face she’d see. Each day she wondered when she would be sold. This trafficker who held the key gained perverse elation from taunting her: “The buyer’s on his way. You’re not bold, like when you tried to escape, causing an altercation.” She remained tethered to hope of terror’s cessation. Meals were nutritious and delicious; the bed, just right. All accommodations were the very best. He’d get more money for a healthy product, a pretty sight. He came bearing lunch and vitamins to invest in his captive and a gun to control this unwilling guest. The familiar sound of the key being inserted was followed by--not a click but a loud thud. She ran and opened the door. There he lay, holding his chest. He blurted, “Help . . . heart attack!” She called the police, ending his plan, the fourth day, but it seemed like a year since the terror began. August 24, 2021 Contest: This or That, vol 6--Tethered to a Moment Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 9/8/2021 3:23:00 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this powerfully moving narrative piece, Janice!:-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/9/2021 1:34:00 PM
Edward, THANKS a million, Janice
Date: 9/8/2021 10:12:00 AM
Striking in its bold imagery and storytelling Janice. The chickens always seem to come home to roost. So well done - a crime so worth exposing! Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/9/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Janice
Date: 8/25/2021 5:36:00 PM
Hello Janice ... a slave trader receiving Karma. Great Janice, with that moment she will never forget - thank you - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/26/2021 4:23:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 8/25/2021 11:36:00 AM
Well said! Parents should remember one is never too young to become a victim!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/25/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Date: 8/25/2021 5:34:00 AM
He got what he deserved. A story well told Janice, we can all relate to. All the best.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/25/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 8/25/2021 1:43:00 AM
Hard to believe that this still goes on Janice but it does. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/25/2021 1:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Date: 8/24/2021 9:50:00 PM
What a story, Janice! I'm glad you wrote about human trafficking. It needs to be brought to the forefront of society and dealt with, since it's caused so much suffering. God bless you for using your talent for poetry to do so.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/25/2021 1:36:00 PM
Jennifer, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 8/24/2021 6:13:00 PM
Wow! Incredible writing. So powerful. I hope you're a winner. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/24/2021 8:39:00 PM
Gina, thanks a million! Janice

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