Testify

Waterfall symphony, strikes
Mother Nature’s redemption!
Our side of heaven, with
no gates…grass, greener.

© Drake J. Eszes 
*John Freeman's Dodoitsu contest: 2nd place! WOO HOO!*

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/13/2013 1:40:00 AM

Drake... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. goodnight. <3 =LINDA=

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/13/2013 8:39:00 AM

Hola & thank you, PD. I hope you had a good night!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/12/2013 8:45:00 AM

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congratulations on your poem being featured.

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/12/2013 8:48:00 AM

Why thank you, Monterey!! =D

Donna Jones

Date: 10/10/2013 5:54:00 PM

Wow..hadn't seen this one....awesome...reminds me of places around Yellowstone...congratulations on being featured this week.:-)

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/10/2013 7:19:00 PM

Ive never been there. Maybe one day. :) Thanks so much, Donna!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/5/2013 7:13:00 PM

Hi Drake thanks for visit and comment.

Poet Tacito
Date: 8/5/2013 10:05:00 PM

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/15/2013 9:17:00 AM

Woo!Hoo..It seems i missed this beauty..and I see you came second in a contest..Glad i got to read it..Im seeing the comments below..Im still wondering what might have happened to lindamarie.I know she was sick..I even sent her a get well soon card cause We shared addresses but She never replied and never returned here..Hope she s ok..and John freeman..not here either..Anyways ..have a lovely day where there are no gates and d grass is evergreen : ).Tnks for reading my last poem too.

Poet Tacito
Date: 7/15/2013 9:19:00 AM

Hi, Charmaine!!! =) I'm glad you got to read this too! Yes, it was awesome to place 2nd! Yes, I wonder the same too...I hope they're both ok. Thank you so much! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/8/2013 12:41:00 PM

well done.... Congratulations.

Poet Tacito
Date: 5/8/2013 3:04:00 PM

Thanks so much! :)

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/22/2013 9:00:00 PM

Congratulations Drake on this well deserved win!! I'm so enjoying your work 'Poet'! Lol the only place the grass will be greener ;) hugs Deb

Poet Tacito
Date: 4/22/2013 9:54:00 PM

LOL indeed! Hi Deborah! Very cool to meet you and thank you so much for your words! :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/9/2011 11:01:00 PM

Wish I held the baton for the symphony Drake, your imagination takes you to fascinating places and I love to come along! - You really give me such nice feelings when you visit. Can't thank you enough for your kind words

Poet Tacito
Date: 10/10/2011 8:33:00 AM

:) I really appreciate that. As with you coming by this way too. It's an awesome thing. Thank you as always!

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/28/2011 6:47:00 PM

Hi Teresa! Thank you so much for that. :)

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 3/28/2011 1:20:00 PM

Oh what words.Congrats on 2nd.place win.Thank-you so very much for the kind comment Drake.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/10/2011 6:57:00 AM

That's quite the interesting comment. I can fully respect that and I definitely grasp where you're coming from with that statement. As for those with your viewpoint, one can only wonder...but, a person like me would stand by your side no matter what. If, for nothing else, humanity's sake. Thank you for coming by here C.L.!!! :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/4/2011 4:34:00 AM

Hey Kacey! =) I placed 2nd actually. Thank you for coming thru!

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 3/3/2011 5:58:00 PM

WOOHOO.HOPE YOU WIN.COOL.......MAD LOVE FOR YOU.

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/2/2011 5:21:00 AM

Hey Tahera! Really awesome of you to say!! =) Thank you!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/2/2011 4:31:00 AM

Waterfall symphony Wow Drake this is super good. Love the whole dodoitsu.

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/1/2011 6:56:00 PM

Indeed Debbie...thank you so very much! I placed 2nd. YAY!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/1/2011 5:00:00 PM

hard song to sing! good luck, Light & Love

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/28/2011 4:45:00 PM

I'll have to look into that. Thank you very much, Linda! =)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 4:00:00 PM

Drake u might like my Extra Extra Extraordinary entry for John Heck's contest.. would appreciate your opinion luv on this difficult theme.. thankxxx...

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/26/2011 11:25:00 PM

@ Carol, Linda, & Annalise, thank you so much for your very kind words. I'm grateful to have been placed so high up with this message.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 9:12:00 PM

Congratulations on you fine 2nd Place win in John's Contest, Drake. Always, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2011 11:21:00 AM

Congrats Drake on a super second place win in John's contest .. super entry ..super win.. enjoy with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 6:25:00 AM

Congratulations on this excellent poem placing 2nd in John's contest Drake. Love, Carol

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/25/2011 3:26:00 AM

Mr. Freeman, thank you SO much for this! I'm truly pleased to hear I ranked so high. Your words are very appreciated sir. @ Deb, yes the "waterfall symphony" are just a combo of two of my favorite things. It was my pleasure to read your work, I shall continue to do so. We all deserve to be seen & heard. @ Andrea, I firmly believe our Heaven should not have any gates. Thank you very much!