Terror Bugs: Epilogue - A Freezer Mice Adventure

[Continued from ‘Terror Bugs: Part 5 - A Freezer Mice Adventure’]
__________ Epilogue
The spaceship’s crew - three man size shrews - paced slowly fore to aft Stanley’s mum said, “Sorry for your poor forsaken craft. Surely we could cleanse it of the carnage and the gore I have access to vinegar, the white kind, and much more.” Churchill said, “Look, Mrs Dann, those bugs had acid blood The only way we’ll save our ship is one more mighty flood But Noah only built one ark: Your Lord will not deliver.” Stanley said, “We’re by the Thames… I hear that it’s a river.”
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Throughout the universes and the galaxies they knew Breathing apparatus exercises had been few But half a dozen tides had scoured their sunken craft of gore So Churchill, in his scuba gear, set course toward the shore His friends would be delighted that the ship would fly again It’s slimy film of river mud would wash off in the rain He thought about the banquet that the Terror Bugs would be As their mutilated bodies washed their way down to the sea On the river’s muddy bank a gull pecked rancid meat Churchill gasped for as he watched the gull grew six new feet It jettisoned its feathers and it sprouted jet black hair A single phaser blast destroyed the seagull then and there Instantly, a throng of creeping critters found the feast Emerging from the mud, a prawn became a savage beast, It turned and mauled a red eyed dog to mute its manic barks And Churchill had to ask himself, “Do British seas have sharks?”

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Date: 4/7/2024 4:23:00 AM
In the style of "The Streets Of San Francisco": The Epilog (I remember it being spelt like that and splashed across the tv screen in days of yore) ..Great ending Terry. We may not have sharks in UK waters but certainly other things courtesy of Thames Water. Enough to make eyes red like the dog that's for sure. I'd get it drawn up and released as a 15 certificate film if you can. :) Cheers - Gary
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Terry Flood
Date: 4/7/2024 4:35:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Gary. That puts you in an elite group of three. If it stays at three, I’m fine with that. I’m glad we don’t have Great Whites in British waters (becoming questionable) as a terror bug/ great white shark mutant would be - potentially - another six parts! Your unlimited persistence is most appreciated. Terry
Date: 4/2/2024 3:40:00 PM
Oh my goodness what bloody gore of a feast you've described! What a great sci fi movie this would make... animated of course. You should be VERY proud of yourself for writing such an epic story, Terry! It was entertaining, to say the least.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/2/2024 9:06:00 PM
oh no! I just had some creamy Havarti with grapes. Now, I'll have to stay awake. Gonna play some Steely Dan! lol
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Terry Flood
Date: 4/2/2024 4:27:00 PM
So chuffed that you’ve enjoyed this latest (and looooongest) Freezer Mice saga, Lin. I’m astounded that you went for the whole thing in one fell swoop…. and flattered. Thanks again and remember… no cheese before bedtime…. It’ll give you nightmares ;-)
Date: 4/1/2024 3:06:00 PM
Excellent Terry, enjoyed every one of the freezer mice adventures. In answer to Churchill’s question, British seas do have sharks. Well done! ~ Beryl
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Terry Flood
Date: 4/1/2024 4:31:00 PM
Seeing what eating bug meat did to a seagull, a prawn and a dog, I thought, ‘Blimey… what would happen if a shark ate some?’ Hmmm…. Think I’ll have a break before giving the Freezer Mice another day out ;-) Thanks, Beryl, for persevering through the whole lengthy tale… I didn’t honestly think anyone would. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
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