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Terrified of Des Moines

I was terrified of a Des Moines move To me this was a big city I was from a town of three thousand I did not think people would neighbor there I had been to New York City once During the garbage strike Rats were all over the streets with their hideously ugly pink tails And their ugly butt holes I thought I was going to be moving to a smelly unfriendly place Being a small-town girl, I had no idea That a bigger town is just a lot of neighborhoods Where people neighbor with each other, just like in small towns. It was a tremendous relief. And there was no garbage strike.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/8/2021 3:22:00 AM
Great write! I think you were describing more than the rats. Glad Des Moines was friendly and did NOT have garbage strikes.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/10/2021 5:28:00 PM
My husband and I saw a Parisian rat...yikes!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/8/2021 10:17:00 AM
I actually was only describing the rats. I forgot to mention how weird it was to say "hello" to a thousand people in one block and have none of them say "hello" back.

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